Reviews for The Warrior Without
fenixrojo36 chapter 8 . 7/16/2017
Naomi chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
73091 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
try re-making The Warrior Without it was a great storyline. i thought it was great overall.
Starcloudy94 chapter 8 . 12/16/2011
i like this story
Starcloudy94 chapter 7 . 12/16/2011
i like it but will pang tong explain about what happen to naruto or what he did
Starcloudy94 chapter 6 . 12/16/2011
well um he is turning into the kyuubi i think but good
Starcloudy94 chapter 5 . 12/16/2011
yes love this chapter
Starcloudy94 chapter 4 . 12/16/2011
like it
Starcloudy94 chapter 3 . 12/16/2011
Starcloudy94 chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
i like it
Starcloudy94 chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
this is a really good story
73091 chapter 8 . 11/2/2011
why is was good even if it dose not seem like a crossover
Peliaos chapter 8 . 9/19/2011
i have some ideas for continuing this story but i'm not sure when i'd get around to it. for the most part i'd continue where you left off.
Lydia of Avalon chapter 4 . 3/28/2011
Your story is pretty good so far, and i'm enjoying it immensely.

but there's one thing about this chapter that sticks out like sore thumb. and that's cultural terminology.

Dynasty Warriors is a game based off an old Chinese historical novel called Romance of 3 Kingdoms. where even the character's names and battle situations and story plot of the game is exactly the same to the novel.

So since you've inserted Naruto into Chinese History to be raised as Nao Tang, it's only fitting that he be using Chinese terminology.

You know, Shifu instead of Sensei, Aiya instead of Itai. That sort of thing. It is China after all, and it's got a whole sea between it and Japan. Even if Liu Bei became interested in Japan, I hardly think that he would have time to study them as he's waging war for most of his life.

Either way, Nao does not have many recourses to be able to learn Japanese, and he was adopted way too young to really remember the language.

well that's my speal, take it or leave it, and keep up the good work.
Lord Blood chapter 2 . 3/21/2010
let me ask you something. what the fuck is the point of making a crossover here? you're basically doing a dw fanfiction, not a naruto/dw fanfiction. just cuz the main char (who would technically be OC) has the same looks as naruto does not make this a naruto fanfiction. it's bad enough that he won't be using any typical techniques from the naruto-verse, but you went ahead and changed his name as well!
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