Reviews for You Make My Dreams Come True
spArkAnGel1918 chapter 23 . 1/2/2011
Hey ashel13!i'm a big fan of y0ur story!i was w0ndering if you could get the chapters s0on!haha!l0l!can't wait!so excited!and i think it would be interesting if you could have the very first real fight of edward and bella out of an extreme jeal0usy to james or any rand0m skank who would try to flirt on edward when he was drunk and then have their hot passi0nate and rough make up sex!
Antonette martinez chapter 23 . 1/2/2011
deleted321 chapter 7 . 12/30/2010

Would you rather lick ice cream off Edwards abs or lick whip cream off jaspers nipples? Kinky? Yes, yes it is.
deleted321 chapter 6 . 12/30/2010
Oh dear ashel-13,

I am a selfish pig for reading this entire story without a single review, I was crushed that I missed review crew day and hope the you will forgive me. You have given me cheesy jokes to laugh at, old songs I never knew about and what do I have to offer you but a single review. I truly am a story hoar for reading too many stories at once but yours has changed me with it's humor and sexy lemons. So thank you mighty powerful ashel-13 for dirty talking Edward dominating Edward a confident Bella cav man Edward hot dry humping sleeping Edward drunk Edward and every side of edward that my eyes had never read about. * bows down to ashel-13*

~ your unworthy reader Twinks8545 [all hail ashel-13]

P.S I wrote this review for MLOONAA but thought that you may not check it. However, it may go for this story as well.

P.S.S I promise to review more and share my dream Edward who lies in the story "nightly satisfaction" and attempt to stop being such a story hoar... Lol
EdwardsBedbreaker1 chapter 23 . 12/28/2010
Plz plz PLZ update soon! Luv the story n cnt wait for more so plz plz PLZ PLZ update soon!
EleanorTheHufflepuff chapter 23 . 12/28/2010
i love it... please carry it on 3
momomegm chapter 23 . 12/26/2010
OOOOO please the next one please! i will appreciate a lot! this story (thanks god i find it) became my favorite please! awesome how you continue it and this time Edward have to learn something about Rosalie.. i don't know something say by james that really offend Bella! ok but enough of me been the writer you are the genuis so please continue it! and thank you very much for writing this story for persons like me who only read! :D

Muchas Gracias desde Sonora Mexico!
BB Masen-Cullen chapter 23 . 12/21/2010
Wow!1 I love this story! and MLOONAA aswell! I was soo glad that you where doing a sequel! and I gotta say I tottally got your Men At Work Reference in MLOONAA I though it was halirious! and it the only refrence i got aswell lol I love this gang soo much! there soo much fun! I cant wait till the next chapter! when is that gonna be by the way? lol I love the story and I love you (for writing it! lol) xoxoxoxo
WorshipTheLight LiveForTheTwi chapter 23 . 12/19/2010
Okay you have got to finish this. Please. You can't just stop right there.
BellaRosa17 chapter 23 . 12/19/2010
Update, soon.
Texy chapter 23 . 12/8/2010
Please update...
startingline722 chapter 23 . 12/3/2010
I absolutely love this story and making love out of nothing at all, but if I had one criticism it owuld be that there needs to be more drama. I love Edward and Bella's relationship, but it seems to perfect. Make them have a huge fight and then the next chapter they can have hot passionate dirty talking Edward sex!
sassygirl91 chapter 23 . 12/1/2010
more please
sami69 chapter 23 . 12/1/2010
Will this be getting finished?
myworldisblue chapter 23 . 12/1/2010
Will you keep updating? Hope so
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