|Reviews for You Make My Dreams Come True|
| sami69 chapter 23 . 12/1/2010
Will this be getting finished?
| myworldisblue chapter 23 . 12/1/2010
Will you keep updating? Hope so
| lonley vampire chapter 23 . 11/27/2010
omg plz update soon my question is if you could edit twilight what would you edit?
| merc80 chapter 23 . 11/26/2010
i read this and mloonaa all within 36 hours. I have to say it is the perfect mix of citrus and laughs. In fact my 6 year old got up and slapped me because i was laughing so much and woke her up. Thanks
| Jennbunjmer chapter 23 . 11/26/2010
I finally caught up :D And it only took me a few days, I find it flippin hilarious when they're drunk, (:
I hope you update soon, because now I don't know what I'll do if you don't ):
| Eddica chapter 23 . 11/26/2010
I laughed so hard! great and funny chapter. I love their (your) sense of humor.
I'm so looking forward to the next one.
Can't wait for James to find out that Edward is the king of shag and that he's shagging beautiful Bella, his future wife
| Eddica chapter 22 . 11/26/2010
I've never been a Christmas fan but I love this chapter.
Just one little problem, I'm going to want a magical Christmas this year just like this one.
How to go about that?
Perfect partner: Check
Perfect tree: Check
lots of family: nope
hot sex: I hope so
Thanks for inspirational writing, please keep it up
| Eddica chapter 21 . 11/26/2010
This is an amazing chapter! in an amazing fanfic!
Ashel-13 you rock!
| Jennbunjmer chapter 19 . 11/25/2010
I liked how you had Edward come to her bedroom window like he does in the books/movie.
And christmas is the most perfect time of year(:
| Jennbunjmer chapter 17 . 11/24/2010
one of the hottest chapters i'll have to admit, even if i am a girl;p
| Jennbunjmer chapter 16 . 11/24/2010
Now I want to go out in our below 0 temperature snow heaven outside and play. even thought its like ten at night.
And I think my last words would be... "Who wants cake.."
no I really don't know what I would want my last words to be. That was totally made up as of... 30 seconds ago. I fail.
| Jennbunjmer chapter 15 . 11/24/2010
This was an amazing way to bring them back for the break. I'm a happy reviewer.
And those movies are awesome no matter how old you get. My grandma still watches them every year(:
| Jennbunjmer chapter 14 . 11/24/2010
Kudos for you (which includes those kudos chocolate deliciousness granola bars... which are completely heaven in a granola bar)
I've never read such good phone sex in a story.
And man, was this good... :D
| Jennbunjmer chapter 13 . 11/24/2010
When you had them sing Girls Just Wanna Have Fun. As I read it, I was singing it in my head. And drunk Bella is so cute, haha
I hope you're not getting annoyed at my comments And are like "Wow Jenni, Just freakin shut up already!"
I wouldn't be hurt about it. My friends have said the same thing to me before.
| Jennbunjmer chapter 12 . 11/24/2010
Mmm. even dirtier Edward(:
Oh and I forgot to mention this a couple chapters back: Do you ever think that you could have Edward lose for the times that they're both trying to resist sex from each other? I think that would be incredibly hot to read ;p
(And maybe you've done it idunno, I haven't caught up completely :p)