|Reviews for You Make My Dreams Come True|
| Jennbunjmer chapter 15 . 11/24/2010
This was an amazing way to bring them back for the break. I'm a happy reviewer.
And those movies are awesome no matter how old you get. My grandma still watches them every year(:
| Jennbunjmer chapter 14 . 11/24/2010
Kudos for you (which includes those kudos chocolate deliciousness granola bars... which are completely heaven in a granola bar)
I've never read such good phone sex in a story.
And man, was this good... :D
| Jennbunjmer chapter 13 . 11/24/2010
When you had them sing Girls Just Wanna Have Fun. As I read it, I was singing it in my head. And drunk Bella is so cute, haha
I hope you're not getting annoyed at my comments And are like "Wow Jenni, Just freakin shut up already!"
I wouldn't be hurt about it. My friends have said the same thing to me before.
| Jennbunjmer chapter 12 . 11/24/2010
Mmm. even dirtier Edward(:
Oh and I forgot to mention this a couple chapters back: Do you ever think that you could have Edward lose for the times that they're both trying to resist sex from each other? I think that would be incredibly hot to read ;p
(And maybe you've done it idunno, I haven't caught up completely :p)
| Jennbunjmer chapter 11 . 11/24/2010
Perfect proposal *sniff* It was really sweet and amazing, and everything you'd hope for... sigh.
And I loved your answer to the question on the bottom AN.
I literally laughed out loud. I got a funny look from my mom.
Totally worth it.
| Jennbunjmer chapter 10 . 11/24/2010
And that song just reminds me of the tv show True Blood. Have you ever seen it. Because it's freaking amazing and I'm super sure you'd probably like it..
| Jennbunjmer chapter 9 . 11/24/2010
"And that's the way the cookie crumbles..."
DTE is my favorite. *shudders* No one could turn him down..
| Jennbunjmer chapter 8 . 11/24/2010
Ohhhh, that lemon was also amazing:p
I really need to get my boyfriend to give me a message... haha
And who wouldn't want Edward in command?
| Jennbunjmer chapter 7 . 11/24/2010
I would've totally picked playing doctor with Carlisle myself. That'd be so amazing *drools*... oh sorry, anyways...
And for your top AN, you don't always need graham crackers for a s'mores. Just surround the marshmellow with two pieces of chocolate, That'd be heaven enough :D
And for the record, Mood rings rock, I can't remember the last time I wore one. But it was sweet from Emmett to Rose :D
| Jennbunjmer chapter 6 . 11/24/2010
Sorry if my reviews seemed to be coming as often as your characters.. I'm trying to catch up, and I think I'm succeeding.
And Ashel... You're stories are one of the only ones I've read that can get such a reaction outta me, and its flippin fantastic.
I don't know how you learned to write lemons so well, but girl you're the queen of them. Seriously.
| Jennbunjmer chapter 5 . 11/24/2010
That was the best Thanksgiving dinner! Haha! I can't believe Alice did that to Jasper, And poor Charlie has no flippin idea...Gosh..
I seriously can't wait to see whats in store with Edward and Bella...and that leather. Ahh! But I promised to become a faithful reader and comment every chapter. (:
| Jennbunjmer chapter 4 . 11/23/2010
The line "fuck doing flips and shit" reminded me of the song "i'm on a boat" by lonely island. where it's like " i'm on a dolphin... doing flips and shit..."
| Jennbunjmer chapter 3 . 11/23/2010
This was a funny chapter:D The lingerie comment about her shaving, but then the thought of what Charlie would've done if he actually saw the little leather outfit. Awesomely funny:D
| Jennbunjmer chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
Muahaha, I think I like 'your' Edward better than the real thing(gasp, I know) But I love how he can be so romantic and sensual one moment, but then the next he's the dirty, forceful Edward we all dream about.
| Jennbunjmer chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
This was a great way to start the sequel. I'm so excited, and I've decided to actually review every chapter this time, even though I have some catching up to do.
And don't worry, that wont take me too long (;
I LOVE that he said her hair looked 'frazzled' an ex boyfriend of mine said the same thing to me before after things got a little... steamy, and I didn't laugh then. But when I look back I laugh really hard at how cheesy and weird it was.