Reviews for before the night turns into dawn
Anonymous chapter 6 . 1/29
I knew I shouldn't have read this. I knew I shouldn't have read this. I KNEW I SHOULDN'T HAVE READ THIS! WHY?! WHY DID I READ THIS! WHY?!

Oh gosh. Crying right now.
I was totally fine w/the epilogue. But, of course, I let my curiosty get the best of me. So, I read this alternate ending. Which, I knew and know, I shouldn't have. D:

*shaky sigh* I'm dead. X(
Great fic... T-T
Juliakaze26 chapter 6 . 4/17/2014
I love angst...and I cried like a baby in this fic...it was beautiful...and poignant...I feel heartbroken for both of them..especially Edward...who is left behind..I sort of stuck with the last ending...
Jazzy-Reader35 chapter 6 . 1/7/2012
Can't wait for the next Part. I feel so bad for Jacob
voyuerer chapter 6 . 10/3/2011
WOW! Poor Jacob, I like to the one that ended better. I always like Seth. Like your portral of Bella real interesting take. I can totally see that.
ShantelCall26 chapter 6 . 6/8/2011
Ok I think that was freaking awesome but the alternet ending was sad but over all I enjoyed your fanfic )
Miss know-all chapter 6 . 5/1/2011
I really like your story. The alternative ending was so depressing... btw your a good writer.
kumagorox3 chapter 6 . 2/15/2011
the alternative ending made me cry. T_T

i'm so glad that unlike other fanfic writers...YOU COULD ACTUALLY WRITE! what a great story! :D you should get more reviews!
Live to anger the World chapter 6 . 2/4/2011
i really liked this story. the alternate ending was almost made me cry, and i haven't cried in at least a year.
Katie's Peacock's Dreams chapter 5 . 9/20/2010
I like this ending better than the alternative. good story, well written, especially at the start.
Teemuh chapter 6 . 8/31/2010
Hi. I'm just now wading through the billion Twilight stories that exist in the universe, and just want to say I really enjoyed this. You know, in a why-don't-you-tear-my-heart-out-now kind of way:) I look forward to reading some of your other fiction :)
lametortoise chapter 6 . 7/24/2010
u're an amazing author... i really loved this story... i've read all ur jacob/edward fics so far and i think they're amazing! pls do write more... ) i've only gotten into this pairing today and well, i think it's safe to say that u've managed to persuade me that it's an awesome pairing with ur works! )

THANK U FOR WRITING! keep it up and pls do write more... )
Miss Itachi Uchiha chapter 6 . 7/11/2010
Loved the story and especially the alternative ending. I'm a sucker for depressing themes. _ Although I understand that many writers want reviews, it's best not to sound desperate about it. It really turns people off about reviewing a story. But I'm reviewing because I thought this story was great. Good luck to your other stories!
ApparentlyRude chapter 6 . 6/16/2010
HOT DAMN!

You can WRITE!

This was so... heartbreaking, and thank you for pointing out that bella is an insane woman (no offense to you if you like her).

:)

Excellent job,

Keep up the Good work,

Lilith G. Astroll
DeviWan chapter 6 . 6/11/2010
WAAAAH! *cries...

that was so amazingly sad! I loved reading it! thanks for posting this.
hinata11807 chapter 6 . 3/16/2010
i was reading the alternate i was cryibg my eyes out. that ending is just an alternative right? so i can choose any ending i want ? man i sound like a kid. well keep on writing you are awesome
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