Reviews for On the Run
icansoar chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Nicely written!
Mini Nicka chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Very sweet
Leah chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
This is a really good! I like the friendship between them. And I hate that they end up not being friends, but your story is something that really could have happened beetwen them!
NaginiFay chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I didn't notice anything wrong with this at all! I really liked at alot, actually!
pipecleanerFlowers chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
that was quite good considering it was written a few years back, but i liked it :) nice description and believable dialogue, good job!
loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Very nice, an enjoyable read! :)
pstibbons chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
And after all that, she would still go on to marry one of Sev's bullies. What a worthless friend Lily turned out to be...
musiclover4life15 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Aww, this story was very bittersweet. I loved it. :)
C.Lovebug chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Aww, that was sad and sweet. I love Severus and to think how bad his childhood AND adult years were is even more depressing. I still luff him though. ]

I didn't realize how much I missed reading your stories until now,haha. This is Katara2102,btw. I dunno if you remember or not ;

Anyway,nice story. :]
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Poor Severus-in the end, he's betrayed by everyone, and left with nothing. Canon was truly horrible to him, as was most everybody around him.