Reviews for Not Fast Enough
Prowl's-fangirl chapter 11 . 10/6/2014
I love this story, please keep writing I really wanna know what happened I'm so interested in this story! :3
Emajade32439 chapter 11 . 7/23/2014
This is good. I hope you will update. I want to know if Starscream will claim Optimus.
espioc chapter 11 . 7/4/2014
well that was quite a doozy. I can't wait to read more, I like how you're making the decepticons look like the better side. Interesting view points, can't wait till the next chapter.
BaraKiryuHuntress chapter 11 . 5/23/2014
Wait are the sparklings Jetfire and Jetstorm? And Optimus is coming into play now? You've got me so excited. :)
Rosabel Moonstar chapter 11 . 5/8/2014
Please update soon. I would dearly love to know what happens next.
silverdeathLBakawhoknows chapter 11 . 4/20/2014
Okay, you updated, the was quite...oh what am I looking for? Oh yes, it caught me off guard.
The Fox Familiar chapter 4 . 4/16/2014
"Also, please note that I write slash stories (or genderless, depending how you look at robots). If you don't like it, please don't comment
I like reviews. I like critisism. I do not like flames, and will not take flames seriously. Please don't waste your time and mine to tell me that you think my stories suck."

- Oh-ho-ho, you gotta love the fag-lovers. They will do ANYTHING to convince themselves that they truly don't suck in this world; they try ever so hard to prove they are human. Well, so long as I am here, and so long as this review box is here, I will flame you until you get the picture.

First, everyone, from Shockwave to Megatron, is insanely OOC. This reads more like a hooker appraisal chart than one about Decepticon brutality. Why would Megatron find Blurr 'attractive'? He's leader of the Decepticons, and frankly, he doesn't have feelings like that. Why do they even 'need' sex slaves, anyways? What's the point of it? Oh, yeah, that's right; there IS no point. You just wanted to make some would-be psycho-sexual thriller where Shockwave is a rapist, Megatron is a rapist, and Blurr is just a little girl in disguise. There's no way in Hell any of them would act this way, and I have no idea what you were thinking when you wrote this.

"If I offended anyone I apologize" - You offend me with your existence, you piece of sub-human scum. This is a glorified rape story. Shockwave is the typical cool, dark and handsome killer that draws the attention of the small, beautiful innocent, who in this case is Blurr. You ladies really don't realize that these fantasies of yours are the reason why so many women make so many shitty writers. Not only do we have the unrealistic story of someone being sexually abused falling in love with their abuser, but we have BDSM, and some political strife in there to add meaning to this otherwise meaningless story.

So I ask: what IS the point? What are you trying to tell with this story? That people can be raped and fall in love with their rapists? That rapists aren't at all bad? That Stockholm Syndrome is cool? Granted, I actually LIKE stories with Stockholm Syndrome present, but in your case, the story makes me want to strap bombs to myself and set them off. You haven't done ANY canon research, and for that, your credibility goes out the window.

Every one of your stories, aside from the cheap gay robot porn, is that - cheap and empty. You're like a hooker selling her wares on a Red Light District, except you're all coked up and the condoms are cheap.
The Fox Familiar chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Let me get this straight: Blurr enjoys getting kissed by a robot that will do anything in the name of logic; who is so cold-hearted and scientific even Megatron is weary of him sometimes, who openly desecrates the Autobot name and more, and yet Blurr 'enjoys' his molestation?

Blurr isn't 'naive'. This is the classic homosexual trope of a rape fic, and just rape fics in general: the victim secretly 'likes' it because they liked the rapist before, and the rapist enjoys destroying the dignity and humility of their victim. Basically, Blurr is Asking For It. He is being taken against his will, and he knows it, yet he secretly enjoys being dominated and ruined because he's attracted to his rapist.

Sick fuck. Let's see you do that to a female, bitch. Neither Shockwave or Blurr or gay, and this wannabe emotional rollercoaster is telling of the author's views on sexual abuse. This is, as Wicked Crazy puts it, consensual rape, which does not exist in real life. I'm sorry that hearing someone scream as someone forces themselves upon another doesn't strike a chord in you, or how those being forcibly penetrated secretly want it because their rapist is hot.

As a matter of fact, this sits in very well with the female rape fantasy. This is what you want. So what do you do? Put robots, of all things, in your place. You have zero dignity. Zero talent. You want a review? Here's mine:

If you have any sort of dignity, you will delete this abomination of consensual rape. You will learn your place, and you will actually know what the fuck you are talking about. Until then, I will continue to flame you, and this story will be charred when I am done with it.
The Fox Familiar chapter 2 . 4/14/2014
'It is not my wish to spill innocent blood' - You forget this is Shockwave, right? He would kill anyone in the name of logic. That's why he's awesome. Plus, you gravely underestimate Blurr. He's not some weak little woman who cowers in fear - he finds ways to get out of stuff. Not really smart of Shockwave to tell him of all his plans.

As for Wasp's innocence - he's Waspinator by now, and he's already not innocent anymore because of his actions in that form.

So, along with an ignorance of canon, this is just a long rape fic. How fascinating.
The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
I think I've come across this fic before, and all it was was Shockwave and Megatron taking turns at raping Blurr. Sorry, but this isn't Shockwave. Shockwave is coldly logical and wouldn't see the need in sexually abusing Blurr, and Megatron would see no need of it, either. Of course, that doesn't matter because you get turned on by this shit. I can't imagine what the sticky version is like - probably has lots of robot sodomy - and generally, the shit females come up with when they are let out of their restraints.

Now, you listen very, very carefully. You've been flamed for a reason. I do not take kindly to those who peddle to those 'kink memes' because it shows that these little bitches need to be hounded and locked up forever. In regards to you, woman, you need a firm check for your head, because anyone who understands canon or logic would know that these things would never happen, and I dare you to write it featuring a female instead of a male.

Shockwave eliminated Blurr because he got in his way. There's no way he would seduce him or rape him, because he just doesn't give a fuck. But what would that matter to someone like you?
Typhos chapter 11 . 4/9/2014
This just gets better and better. I am so excited for the next chapter.
Foxy chapter 11 . 4/4/2014
yeah, okay I jumped for joy when I saw this was updated
I like how things are progressing: new Autobots coming on the Decepticon side
and I adored the end XD
Taboo22 chapter 11 . 4/4/2014
great chapter!
Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 11 . 4/3/2014
Please continue! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Gina Ichimaru's girl chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Oh boy! THis should bring some intresting revelations. Megatron is hard but fair and I get the feeling that He's going to be furious. I also think Blurr is going to be glad that he defected. Intresting that the little ones are already so attached to Optimus I really hope he survives. Oh but the AutoBots have so lost him I think.
Was ever so excited to get an update and I can't wait for the next one!

Till next time
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