keep writing i like this story

I like the main idea of the story, the lusty feelings that Kagome share for Sesshomaru. However, you have a lot of spelling errors, and the plot isn't being clear. You kinda rush straight to the point where she and sesshomaru talk, skipping the build up of continual dreams and fantasies of kagome, maybe seeing him a few glances before they actually talk, or maybe even some kind of twists to make it interesting

Awesome chapter ;)

O totally hotness

Great chapter ;)