Reviews for Idle Contemplation
Snagam80 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
A very interesting take on the Sarah/Cameron/John connection. It was disturbing in a good way, if such a thing is possible. :-P
justjoann chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
WOW, really great story! I love the way you captured Cameron as a terminator that's been reprogramed rather than a human being. I think after watching the show (every episide) we all get caught up in the fantasy of her being human or having human emotions but when it all comes down to it she really is just a machine. In your writing you didn't deviate from that.

I love the way you wrote the sex scene without all of the graphics that comes along with writing sex (love) scenes and was still able to get your point across.

Even thogh you misplaced a couple of words, the story was written well enough to follow without notice.

The only negative thing I could say about this story would be that it was so short.

I loved it, and I wish you would write more Cameron/Sarah stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
That was you write more.
Archimedes III chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Urg. I'm not even going to read this. . .

Break up these massive walls of text into paragraphs and employ a beta-reader.

-Archimedes IlI
fv chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
u should right more