Hi there, sorry its been so long since I reveiwed, and I could of sworn I had read this chapter before but can't for the life of me remember why I didn't reveiw it. At any rate, I loved it.

The scientist has a very well devoloped personality to which you can instantly relate, and the story itself is written in a way that makes me feel like you REALY know his situation. It's extreamely lifelike. To think that all that would come from a missing pare of pants is quite remarkable. Just plain good writing the way it should be. I'll try to get back later and finish the rest, but right now it's late so I'll see ya later.

9TailedFox.

Xd yes, that is crack indeed

Lol, I had to have another before I go, and I'm glad I chose to too. Your incredibly vivid writing skills shine through in this one as well, resoulting in the best Zoid fight I've ever seen here. The description of the battle coupled with the emotions and actions of the pilots made it feel like you were there in the Liger with bit, or at least watching from the sidelines.

I usually try to help by giving advice, but there is non required here, and to give some would be like the student corecting the teacher because your skill with words is far beyond mine. Its obvious you have clear pictures in your head of the scene that allow you to put vivid descriptions onto the page. Great, just great. I'll be returning soon.

9TailedFox.

Hi there. I think I've reviewed another work of yours before, but if not I know I've read this before; however, cant think of why I didnt review... In any case, I loved it. Although I'm not farmiliar with the charactors or the plot, you have managed to write in such a fashion that I instantly feel connected to Stormer and Elena.

Your descriptions are quit vivid while staying just vague enough to let the imagination complete the picture and it has a very real feel. I also liked the interaction between the two. I'm not really a fan of the excessivly mushy stuff that you see most of the time here so this simple moment of awareness is perfect.

I don't say this to many people here at , but its truly flawless. I'll be back for more later cause this is great stuff so keep up the great work.

9TailedFox.

I liked it!

great chapter

Nice. Very nice, Tilly. I like what did here. Good job at capturing Fiona and Reese's characters. Although it started off sad, it had a nice ending I must say.

Kudos to you. Now if only I could write like that, but I can't! Mega Man X calls for my attention!

You've definietly reviewed more of my work than I have yours so I decided to take this golden opportunity to return the favor D

I checked out ur deviantart profile too, your Biting Plant of Nyx is hilarious, poor little thing though ) I might use it one day if I ever write a fanfic abt Nyx! Both your Mach and Leogator drawings are impressive, you've got a good 'shape-spatial' kinda sense to them!

Anyways, back to this particular chapter, again I appreciated you using the Battle Story, and especially enjoyed the black humor, a kinda 'bitter ironic sarcasm' into Hiltz, especially the relationship between him and 'Chompy,' much more entertaining than him and Ambient D

Oh yeah and "had to play the good evil regent, didn't you, after I said just feed the brat to Chompy" is a classic line. P

XD that was funny

I love this fic! The first chapter was awesome

this story is really good. keep it up. i loved the way the you set up this chapter.

Hey there, Tilly. Really enjoyed the first chapter of this fic, we definitely need some more Battle Story fanfics (even if this is only a chapter) here but mostly it was great that you showed the lives of the 'royal people' in the story. I don't quite know how to put it in words, maybe it's just the simplicity of a girl curious in another guy but the way you wrote it was really enchanting. Great job here.