Reviews for Red, White & Who
superwoman1015 chapter 4 . 7/30/2011
Yup, this was awesome :) Not trying to be something its not, with the perfect mix of alien, danger and humor that the Doctor is known for. And I could totally see the TARDIS wanting to keep Jane, he does have a cute smile after all :)
superwoman1015 chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
I'll be honest, I don't visit the cross over page often, but came over to check out another DW/TM cross over and saw this and had to read. You've got 10 down flat. I can see him interacting with Jane and Lisbon and, well, all of them. Love it. I miss him, 11 is nice and all, but there was something about 10. Anyway, wonderful stuff you've got here.
Kyizi chapter 4 . 6/24/2011
ohmygod I think I love you! This is possibly the best thing I have read in a LONG time. Patrick Jane and the Doctor being all awesome together is just the most awesome thing in the universe; thank you so much for writing this! *flails some more*
Dimac99 chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
I'm not much of a Mentalist fan, but I really enjoyed this, esp when Jane started psyching the aliens by psychoanalysing them - genius!
Truth and Chaos chapter 4 . 5/5/2011
I am just a little bit in love with you're writing style right now. This story was fantastic. On spot with all of their personalities. Love the humor. And I love that you used the 10th doctor. David Tennant is so yummy.
Truth and Chaos chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
I lol'ed at the "Bigfoot sightings" part. Actually I'm still laughing.
Psychedelica chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
That was really good! Sorry if I sound surprised, but I wasn't expecting to get into it so much! :)

3 Mentalist

3 Doctor Who

3 The two combined! :)))))
MerriWyllow chapter 4 . 2/15/2011
Brilliant. Spot-on Ten. And was Jane channeling Lord Peter Wimsey there at the end?
Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 4 . 1/30/2011
(agrees, nodding) it was a very good crackfic.

MayFairy chapter 4 . 1/18/2011
i thought it was very funny! Jane and the Doctor would make the funniest duo!
Darkly Dreaming chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Reviewing as I go, and I probably won't review again til the end.

But I have to say this: *snigger* ...memory Hannibal... *snigger* I love Dr. Lecter.

Just saying, I hate present tense writing. It's awkward. BUT you do what's comfortable, so don't mind me. Just...pick a tense and stay with it. I know it's hard. Sometimes you just don't notice it. All we can do is try. :)

x-EmilyTennant-x chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
Eeee, I'm bouncing with joy. This was not only hilarious but in-character as well! I'm insanely happy now :)
Shard Aerliss chapter 4 . 12/5/2010
That was fun XD I like the almost choppy style you have (when you stick to one tense :P) and you've got all the characters down perfectly (ignoring the 'ship... but that's personal taste).

Cho's lines were hilarious and I loved the little movie script scene... and the jelly-babies.

You even got in some techno-babble. Nice one!

Great work.
Shard Aerliss chapter 2 . 12/4/2010
Oooh, only 4 chapters, not 10. Eyesight must have gone funny XD

Why can't I edit my review? Didn't we used to be able to do that?
Shard Aerliss chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
*snigger* Perfect Lisbon so far... and I already want to smack the (10th) Doctor upside his cheesy grin face, so that's a good sign you're doing it right.

You wrote a 10 chapter crackfic? Are you nuts?

Guess that goes without saying, really XD

Just one little CC; you seem to be jumping around with tenses, quite a bit. Not a big thing, I find myself doing it all the time and I usually only catch it when I go back to a work few months after the last edit.

Onward I go, to Ch2! Well okay, copy/paste to my Kindle so I can read it at work, but you know what I mean.
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