Reviews for Love Will Keep Us There
Piper chapter 7 . 6/12
WHAT THE FUCK! I loved your first story and the beginning of this, but Edward ducking raped her? this shot is terrible.
Orangeduck23 chapter 18 . 5/28
FOR FUCKS SAKE PICK A SIDE EDWARD OR JASPER. IM DONE! This piece of crap isn’t worth anymore of my time. You’ve ruined it.
Orangeduck23 chapter 16 . 5/28
So far you’ve ruined the whole first story for me. What the hell were you thinking?! Bella’s annoying, and Edward is a RAPIST. INEXCUSABLE
Penelope05 chapter 23 . 5/28
why is Edward being such a dick!
Supergirl503675 chapter 3 . 5/14
I love this story so much! You're amazing! I just want to cry!
VryUnique chapter 5 . 3/17
I guess Bella doesn't need to be in Italy for Aro to get all the details since he will be able to see it. Jasper said he was going alone and she just said you can't leave me but she never even pushed to go with him which was strange.
VryUnique chapter 4 . 3/17
I would think they should be worried the Volturi might want to keep her. This will be something never seen before. I'm betting Carlisle will say next chapter that bellamshould go with him.
VryUnique chapter 3 . 3/17
I think there would have been more doubt and shock. I'm surprised Carlisle didn't tell her to not get her hopes up because her new body might not be able to accommodate the pregnancy when the baby starts growing.
Debbie Hicks chapter 46 . 3/8
47.
Outtake: Bella's Army
Bella's pov
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lovergyrl100 chapter 7 . 3/5
I love the story so far but please let it not be HIS child! Both of them were betrayed not just Jasper
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31
Wow, this story was amazing, I could not stop reading it until I finished it, I'm happy because Edward could find someone to bring happiness in his life. I love Cullen. I am going to read te next history about hope
Thanks for your time
Regards
nadia chapter 27 . 1/10
alice is going to end up with felix
latreasem1 chapter 27 . 8/28/2017
Dr Chunky Monkey HAH!
latreasem1 chapter 25 . 8/28/2017
OMG Could you have Fuckward any more of a pompous A$$. Fucking Doucheward
latreasem1 chapter 24 . 8/28/2017
I love this trilogy. I actually had forgotten I read this. But once I started reading it again. I fell in love with it all over gain. I am actually not sure I finished the 3rd one. But I will make sure I will this time.
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