|Reviews for Damsel|
| minako366 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
“You better hurry,” Bella said softly, her eyes holding Alice’s. “The virus is spreading. I can feel myself fading away.”
“Not on my watch!” Alice declared
This part was just too cute for words
| Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
hahaha so funny and sexy! nice job )
| 7RyPtoPh4n chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
haha i loved it XD perfect.
another job well done :)
| O. N. Labbit chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
This was really fun. Very well done. I loved the role-play idea. Alice and Bella are so perfect together. :)
| Turn.Me.On chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Awesome awesome awesome :)
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Well... it is different...
| neveraworsename chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
That was sick! I was totally convinced that Bella had been kidnapped and left to die and that Alice was going to have her way with her, but tnat was so Bella, giving it up. I have to say though, Bella may be bad at role-play, but the ideas sounded mighty fine.
| Emziiee-xxx chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
that was great :)
loved it :)
| grangergirl22 chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Nice!You totally had me sold on thinking Alice was crazy in this one. Loved it. Keep up the great stories.
| iEve chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Excellent story. Again, the characterization is perfect!
I'm in love with your work. It's truely amazing in the most addictive sense!
Please write more. You're too good!
| Miss Late Bloomer chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
LOL. For a while, I was going WTF. When did Alice turn into such a predator? It was all very hot (I like this couple, sorry Edward) but I was a little confused, and then when it came out that it was all a game, it made total sense. Very creative little game. Role playing can be such fun. Very well written, vivid imagery and all that.
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I love it... What a naughty role play
| BocMage chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
An interesting thought. Sounds like it could be a one shot from your you excellent "The Edge" or even a possible continuation of the storyline as you show alice and bella needingto find ways to 'experiment' and how emmett always try to watch. I find the idea of emmett "accidentally" coming across bella and alice an proposition.
Great work as usual, because for a while you had me going thinking Bella was in trouble,
| WonderousPlaceForAnEcho chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
that was unexpected and interesting. I was hoping it was a role playing game and I'm glad it was because Alice is too sweet to be cruel. it was quirky and the characters seemed to be having fun with one another.
| buggie21 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Hah. That was hawt.
Role playing is amazing.
I love the idea of Alice being a knight, though. That would be adorable. Reminds me of tiny Alanna from Tamora Pierce's novels... :)