Reviews for Damsel
PixieInDarkness chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
hahah i loved that, it was so intense untill she said "You're not supposed to sound like you actually want it,Bella" hahah then i burst out laughing when i found out it was role-playing. good one-shot, much love to ya..x

-Claire-
gschelt chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
a little confused at first..

but the whole roleplaying thing, when i finally caught on,

GENIUS.
deadaccount2014 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
this was awesome! by far one of the best Alice/Bella one-shots written. I like the end, because it had me cracking up.
pishon de nadie chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
OMG! I read some of your storys and I found very fond of your style. I love your ideas, your descriptions; especially love how your describes Alice in this one.

When I started reading, thought "I don't like Alice evil" and when finished, can't stop laugh to think that she would be totally someone to enter in character :D

Well I hope you keep in write more of them two, I love Bella/Alice and yours are the best I've read.
minako366 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
“You better hurry,” Bella said softly, her eyes holding Alice’s. “The virus is spreading. I can feel myself fading away.”

“Not on my watch!” Alice declared

This part was just too cute for words
Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
hahaha so funny and sexy! nice job )
7RyPtoPh4n chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
haha i loved it XD perfect.

another job well done :)
O. N. Labbit chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
This was really fun. Very well done. I loved the role-play idea. Alice and Bella are so perfect together. :)
Turn.Me.On chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Awesome awesome awesome :)
Teresa Kaiju chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Well... it is different...
neveraworsename chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
That was sick! I was totally convinced that Bella had been kidnapped and left to die and that Alice was going to have her way with her, but tnat was so Bella, giving it up. I have to say though, Bella may be bad at role-play, but the ideas sounded mighty fine.
Emziiee-xxx chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
that was great :)

loved it :)
grangergirl22 chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Nice!You totally had me sold on thinking Alice was crazy in this one. Loved it. Keep up the great stories.
iEve chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Excellent story. Again, the characterization is perfect!

I'm in love with your work. It's truely amazing in the most addictive sense!

Please write more. You're too good!
Miss Late Bloomer chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
LOL. For a while, I was going WTF. When did Alice turn into such a predator? It was all very hot (I like this couple, sorry Edward) but I was a little confused, and then when it came out that it was all a game, it made total sense. Very creative little game. Role playing can be such fun. Very well written, vivid imagery and all that.
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