|Reviews for Damsel|
| iEve chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Excellent story. Again, the characterization is perfect!
I'm in love with your work. It's truely amazing in the most addictive sense!
Please write more. You're too good!
| Miss Late Bloomer chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
LOL. For a while, I was going WTF. When did Alice turn into such a predator? It was all very hot (I like this couple, sorry Edward) but I was a little confused, and then when it came out that it was all a game, it made total sense. Very creative little game. Role playing can be such fun. Very well written, vivid imagery and all that.
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I love it... What a naughty role play
| BocMage chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
An interesting thought. Sounds like it could be a one shot from your you excellent "The Edge" or even a possible continuation of the storyline as you show alice and bella needingto find ways to 'experiment' and how emmett always try to watch. I find the idea of emmett "accidentally" coming across bella and alice an proposition.
Great work as usual, because for a while you had me going thinking Bella was in trouble,
| WonderousPlaceForAnEcho chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
that was unexpected and interesting. I was hoping it was a role playing game and I'm glad it was because Alice is too sweet to be cruel. it was quirky and the characters seemed to be having fun with one another.
| buggie21 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Hah. That was hawt.
Role playing is amazing.
I love the idea of Alice being a knight, though. That would be adorable. Reminds me of tiny Alanna from Tamora Pierce's novels... :)
| Miss Darkmoon chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
*picks jaw up off the floor*
Uh... ... guh?
Wow, seriously... amazing... and LOL that Bella ruined the role-playing, I can totally see her doing that xD
I love your Alice and Bella, and I love this fic! Awesome job, and thanks for writing!
| xXxSourdoughxXx chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
ah! brilliant! delightful. charming. hot. and funny.
| MaxximumRide666 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Totally loved the role play, it was so convincing all the way through, until Bella ruined it XD
Excellent job with the characters! I love Bella and Alice together, they are so perfect for each other!
Love it )
| 1010'jin chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Ha ha, this was terrific. The moment I realized that this was actually roleplaying, I started cracking up. I had totally thought it was the real deal. This was seriously good. Though in retrospect, I probably shouldn't be laughing because hot!Alice almost made my nose bleed. Gah.
| nickolefox chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
I enjoyed this. :) A nice deviation from 'normal' Alice & Bella stories.
| jquackers chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Alice to the rescue! :D
Or not so much..
Role playing rocks. Makes things so much more interesting. XD
LOL. I like the last part. How dramatic. XD
| GothicPheonix chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Love your Bellice fanfic. You should write another one; you're good at this pairing. XD
| Galmil chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
That was good. Definitely a different take. I was confused in the beginning but your stories always turn out well :D