Reviews for Damsel
iEve chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Excellent story. Again, the characterization is perfect!

I'm in love with your work. It's truely amazing in the most addictive sense!

Please write more. You're too good!
Miss Late Bloomer chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
LOL. For a while, I was going WTF. When did Alice turn into such a predator? It was all very hot (I like this couple, sorry Edward) but I was a little confused, and then when it came out that it was all a game, it made total sense. Very creative little game. Role playing can be such fun. Very well written, vivid imagery and all that.
Inkfire chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I love it... What a naughty role play
BocMage chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
An interesting thought. Sounds like it could be a one shot from your you excellent "The Edge" or even a possible continuation of the storyline as you show alice and bella needingto find ways to 'experiment' and how emmett always try to watch. I find the idea of emmett "accidentally" coming across bella and alice an proposition.

Great work as usual, because for a while you had me going thinking Bella was in trouble,


WonderousPlaceForAnEcho chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
that was unexpected and interesting. I was hoping it was a role playing game and I'm glad it was because Alice is too sweet to be cruel. it was quirky and the characters seemed to be having fun with one another.
buggie21 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Hah. That was hawt.

Role playing is amazing.

I love the idea of Alice being a knight, though. That would be adorable. Reminds me of tiny Alanna from Tamora Pierce's novels... :)

Miss Darkmoon chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
*picks jaw up off the floor*

Uh... ... guh?

Wow, seriously... amazing... and LOL that Bella ruined the role-playing, I can totally see her doing that xD

I love your Alice and Bella, and I love this fic! Awesome job, and thanks for writing!


xXxSourdoughxXx chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
ah! brilliant! delightful. charming. hot. and funny.
MaxximumRide666 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009

Totally loved the role play, it was so convincing all the way through, until Bella ruined it XD

Excellent job with the characters! I love Bella and Alice together, they are so perfect for each other!

Love it )
1010'jin chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Ha ha, this was terrific. The moment I realized that this was actually roleplaying, I started cracking up. I had totally thought it was the real deal. This was seriously good. Though in retrospect, I probably shouldn't be laughing because hot!Alice almost made my nose bleed. Gah.
nickolefox chapter 1 . 5/24/2009

I enjoyed this. :) A nice deviation from 'normal' Alice & Bella stories.
jquackers chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Alice to the rescue! :D

Or not so much..

Role playing rocks. Makes things so much more interesting. XD

LOL. I like the last part. How dramatic. XD
GothicPheonix chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Love your Bellice fanfic. You should write another one; you're good at this pairing. XD
Galmil chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
That was good. Definitely a different take. I was confused in the beginning but your stories always turn out well :D
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