|Reviews for Damsel|
| Miss Darkmoon chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
*picks jaw up off the floor*
Uh... ... guh?
Wow, seriously... amazing... and LOL that Bella ruined the role-playing, I can totally see her doing that xD
I love your Alice and Bella, and I love this fic! Awesome job, and thanks for writing!
| xXxSourdoughxXx chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
ah! brilliant! delightful. charming. hot. and funny.
| MaxximumRide666 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Totally loved the role play, it was so convincing all the way through, until Bella ruined it XD
Excellent job with the characters! I love Bella and Alice together, they are so perfect for each other!
Love it )
| 1010'jin chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Ha ha, this was terrific. The moment I realized that this was actually roleplaying, I started cracking up. I had totally thought it was the real deal. This was seriously good. Though in retrospect, I probably shouldn't be laughing because hot!Alice almost made my nose bleed. Gah.
| bleed4her chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
I enjoyed this. :) A nice deviation from 'normal' Alice & Bella stories.
| jquackers chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Alice to the rescue! :D
Or not so much..
Role playing rocks. Makes things so much more interesting. XD
LOL. I like the last part. How dramatic. XD
| GothicPheonix chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Love your Bellice fanfic. You should write another one; you're good at this pairing. XD
| Galmil chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
That was good. Definitely a different take. I was confused in the beginning but your stories always turn out well :D