Reviews for Damsel
Miss Darkmoon chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
*picks jaw up off the floor*

Uh... ... guh?

Wow, seriously... amazing... and LOL that Bella ruined the role-playing, I can totally see her doing that xD

I love your Alice and Bella, and I love this fic! Awesome job, and thanks for writing!


xXxSourdoughxXx chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
ah! brilliant! delightful. charming. hot. and funny.
MaxximumRide666 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009

Totally loved the role play, it was so convincing all the way through, until Bella ruined it XD

Excellent job with the characters! I love Bella and Alice together, they are so perfect for each other!

Love it )
1010'jin chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Ha ha, this was terrific. The moment I realized that this was actually roleplaying, I started cracking up. I had totally thought it was the real deal. This was seriously good. Though in retrospect, I probably shouldn't be laughing because hot!Alice almost made my nose bleed. Gah.
bleed4her chapter 1 . 5/24/2009

I enjoyed this. :) A nice deviation from 'normal' Alice & Bella stories.
jquackers chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Alice to the rescue! :D

Or not so much..

Role playing rocks. Makes things so much more interesting. XD

LOL. I like the last part. How dramatic. XD
GothicPheonix chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Love your Bellice fanfic. You should write another one; you're good at this pairing. XD
Galmil chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
That was good. Definitely a different take. I was confused in the beginning but your stories always turn out well :D
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