Getting run over by an automobile is a recurring accident in this story.

Love how Amos dealt with Percy

Tonks getting a face full of dog doo is hilarious.

Why were Alex and Alexandria Karkarov there for Peter Krum? Did his parents only care about Viktor or what?

McNair is a moron. Rule number one, don't piss off the people who prepare your food or you just might ingest/consume something you didn't intend to.

My bad I meant seventy gallons, seventeen and a half is only ten weeks worth of polyjuice.

I have to agree with you on polyjuice, the amount Jr had to have consumed for an entire school year must have been staggering. It would have been a full-time job just to brew the stuff and that's not even factoring in the rarity of the ingredients. Sixteen doses a day for ten months assuming that a one-ounce mouthful of potion is a one-hour dose, then that would be a pint a day, 1.75 gallons a week for ten months or seventeen and a half gallons of that mud-like gloop.

Now I remember why I prefer stories where the scarcrux is dealt with early on. Harry constantly passing out and having Voldie-visions all the time is very inconvenient and it was a major liability in canon. It very well could be responsible for Cedric getting killed, Harry was distracted by that infernal scar, and his whining about the scar hurting distracted Cedric so that he didn't notice the green light coming toward him.

As far as I know, most british police don't carry firelegs. I think they have one man with a shotgun for shooting out car tires and the like but mostly they rely on overwhelming numbers and brute force to take down criminals.

I really enjoyed your story.

Alright, my first impression is that Harry is one big downer. So far he can take just about any topic and make it uncomfortable or depressing.

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By stockings can I assume you mean socks or do English private schools have stocking for males,? I honestly have no idea
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A wonderful story. I especially enjoyed your take on the horcrux situation and how you developed Harry as a person independently from his relationship. It made for an engaging read that held me captive chapter after chapter. Thank you for sharing your work, its been a pleasure to read.