Reviews for Alastair's Plaything
moira4eku chapter 3 . 5/29/2009
Poor, poor Dean! I do believe Ava is crazier than Alistair. I'm curious as to how Joshua is Alistair's son, that was a nice twist. I don't know how much more Dean can take. I hope Sam, Bobby, and Joshua can save him soon. I hope Ruby takes a big fall here.
hup123hup123slapslap chapter 3 . 5/29/2009
Bumbumbum! I'm back to review again! I'm surprised this doesn't have more reviews 'cause it should because it's like...the poster story for awesomeness lol

Anywho, Ruby sarcasticness was written very well! It seems like something she'd actually say/think/do whatever. I don't like the new Ruby AT ALL even before the finale, but you write her well enough to make her bearable. It feels so wrong to like Dean torture scenes this much! Honestly, you write 'em...coolly? I've run out of words to describe this XP Dean begging was a little odd but understandable and nice to read...is that bad? But, I would love to see more Alistair torturing Dean for obvious reasons. And, if you don't have many torture ideas left just do maybe one or two a chapter, just so you don't drain your brain.

Ava is a surprisingly great character. She seems like someone who could be on the show, and that gives you major author points in my book. I am incredibly glad her 'dates' are only torture...even I wouldn't want poor Dean to go through THAT. Ruby getting beat up soon, SO GREAT! That is music to my...eyes? You know what I mean (hopefully)seriously, it'd be a great change of pace to have a character I hate get hurt. I normally don't read those stories. Odd huh? Sam and Castiel (and Joshua) in the next chapter would be great!

This is the longest review I've ever submitted...I guess that proves how incredibly amazing you are! Please update soon! I couldn't LIVE if you didn'y...well, I guess I could but I wouldn't be happy! And sorry for the completely weirdness of the review C:
hup123hup123slapslap chapter 2 . 5/27/2009
*giggle* Gosh I always knew not all the angels were...completely angelic XP Or I at least had suspicions

This was great! The Dean whumping was whump, and yet was written well and wasn't just for the sake of whump...soo...LOVED IT! Please update soon! Oh, and can Cassi come to save Dean too? You know he wants too! lol I'm hyperactive today
Iuliana chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Great start. I like the new character that u introduced and can t wait to find out more about Joshua. Hope u'll update soon cuz I'll be here waiting
hup123hup123slapslap chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Good start! The pace was good, but I think line breaks would make it easier to read the scene changes *nod* But it really was good, so I hope you update soon! OMG OMG *bounces* More Cassi in the next chap? Pleasse? *puppy dog eyes* I love that dang angel
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