Reviews for Alive
Angeliquee chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Berry interesting I was shocked in the end but I liked it
HopelessTokkalover chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Your story was full of passion and emotion, something I think most writers are lacking. Overall, I loved it and I hope to see more of your work :)
Allie Salvatore chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
This was so strangely accurate I'm just staring at my screen in awe. The characterization, the general tone... all of it was simply perfect. I'm stunned.
account-is-terminated1221 chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
I LOVED it. XD

Your style of writing is really, really enjoyable to read for me! It's not too blatantly descriptive, yet it also doesn't drown me in metaphors like some stories do (if you know what I mean, lol) so I was impressed by how you went about things. This story really stood out for me and it's definitely going on my favorites list; so great job! :D
snoopygirl11 chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
Great, well written fanfic. I loved "Find Sebastian. Find his butler. Find his demon. Find his fear. Find himself." Also, I especially liked "He's going to make his master burn. He adores his master." That was amazing, how Sebastian was thinking of mixing pain and burning with adoration. Such a demon
racooncity chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Nice :) I love how you pictured Ciel closing himself from Sebby, but opened up in the end. I don't think I spotted any kind of grammar mistake :D and good idea. Too bad, it's like it's cut short though XP the smut scene ahhahaha just kidding.

No worries, I liked it :D thanks for making a fanfic for this lovable pairing!
Tristitia-The-Sin chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
It's cool, really, I like the way you made it so deep. It's almost as if they really were alive somewhere with all their feelings, needs and fears. And for an instant I truly felt Ciel's sorrow, and Sebastian's need to make his master happy. Thank you.
Urae chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
AHSLSKDSL:;;!1

That.. that was freaking AMAZING. I love the composition in this, like how you centered the font to make things a tad bit more like a chain of thought.

Ciel was so stubborn about it at first, and that was hot. I do love how he told Sebastian to GTFO of his office despite the fact that he probably REALLY wanted some tea xD

Uhm.. yeah. I love this.
We-Be-Cool chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Okay, um, HOT!
rainbow cupcake chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
O_O

This...

was so...

well written.

*reads again and again*

*adds to favorites*
Behest.R chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
beautiful story, amazing concept.! i have to say one of the best kuroshitsuji fanfics ive read so far. Keep up the great work:)
RedGoldX3 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
that was really good :) ahh poor Ciel. so much angst. XD

but i liked the way you wrote it loads. especially how you went into the feelings. :)

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anon azure chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
don't worry you did fine...

I for one is impressed...

You should make an M version...
Gingerbread Owl chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Very nice! I liked how you started with a deliciously hot moment, toned it down again and built it back up again in the final sections.
silverfoxninja chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Very interesting story that you have here and a very interesting take that you have given for the turn of events that has taken place at the end of the series. It makes me wonder though, just how far Sebastian actually went and if he actually took Ciel's soul at all, or maybe he did it piece by painful piece over time. Very good and enticing read.
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