Reviews for Yaoi Ocean 3
PervyMonk chapter 13 . 6/9/2010
Lol. I thought I loved Nel before. XD Affection points just doubled!

Also, Cliff is a bitch. DX Sexy though.
PervyMonk chapter 12 . 6/9/2010
Nice sex scenes! :D Poor Fayt though. Totally an uke to everyone. Also, I loved the 1/144 Scale Bunny scene. XD
PervyMonk chapter 7 . 6/7/2010
Lol. Now it's Albel the manslut! I totally lost it at 'Fortunately, it was too cold to get an erection.' XD XD XD
PervyMonk chapter 6 . 6/7/2010
Lol. Cliff the manslut. 3 3 3
PervyMonk chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
What's going on, indeed. Great story so far! Only one spelling mistake- Cliff straitened and looked away, raising an arm to scratch his head, and to hide his face. You write good kissing scenes! :D

Off to read more!

Monk Out
Keeper of Fatestones chapter 24 . 6/4/2010
Lemme just say I've been reading this nonstop (save for updates from other stories) since I found it. It's... it leaves me at a loss for words... Having a near-flawless recolletion of the in-game events helps too. The lemons were so very hot and the emotion were very tangible. This was an unbelievable read from expected start to tear-jerker ending.
ChaosGarden chapter 18 . 9/18/2009
oh just what is cliff cooking up? haha great chapter!
sharkteef chapter 18 . 9/16/2009
I just recently came back to this story when I noticed how much you had updated, and you had a good start with the first few chapters, so I was interested. But I think I've lost a few brain cells reading the last couple updates. The fact you actually added in "refer to x scene" instead of writing a short description yourself is... incredibly lazy. It makes it feel very rushed, like you don't even care what you're writing about.

As far as characterization goes, I think you did a decent job there. Some of the scenes were a bit unrealistic though, like you were trying to write them as they'd appear in a cartoon. But maybe that's what you were going for? It kind of takes away any seriousness though.

Overall, I think your story could be more enjoyable if it were presented better.
ChaosGarden chapter 17 . 9/8/2009
*giggles* yummy smut and great chapter xD
ChaosGarden chapter 16 . 9/2/2009
um... this is chapter 15 ; lol.
ChaosGarden chapter 15 . 8/25/2009
lovely chapter. cliff chasing albel tho was hilarious. i was dying of laughter over here! i hope that cliff will understand and he and albel will be good again _
ChaosGarden chapter 14 . 8/15/2009
*giggles evilly* maria and nel are converting our prude sophia to yaoi fangirlism... oh i like this! now if only they could get a video of cliffxfaytxalbel... oh baby wouldn't that be one helluva gift for maria's yaoi group! XD
1234569 chapter 14 . 8/12/2009
wo!

we finally got some fayt and albel time.

haha.

hopefully cliff will stop being a stuborn idiot soon.
PetiteRenard chapter 13 . 8/6/2009
XD Jealous Fayt win I like the story and how it actually followed the storyline events.
ChaosGarden chapter 13 . 8/5/2009
lol i so knew that was coming! yaoi fangirls can't be contained xD i'm kinda mad at cliff and fayt for treating albel like that... i hope things will get better soon now that albel has nel and maria on his side xD
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