Reviews for New Car
Kryptonian54 chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
It's funny to read. I can picture the scenes. You did a good job with all the characteres. Keep it up.
Trinity005 chapter 2 . 5/31/2009
Hey, I think your story is nice. The plot is interesting.

The only suggestion I have is that when you're starting a line from a different character, you start another paragraph. It makes it a lot easier to read.
SamRox20 chapter 2 . 5/31/2009
love it! so wanna read the next chapter!

your sis (lol)

-Sam
xokaleigh chapter 2 . 5/31/2009
Haha I love Ethel xD

Loved that you used the term "candy apple red car" - just like my story about Corny Collins :D
xokaleigh chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
yay a new Lucy story! i liked it.

oh and by the way, ricky isn't spelled with an e. (:
LucyLove101 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Your chapter is great!