|Reviews for Eternity|
| Kat chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Simply perfect! And I agree with the others, a little sequel would be great ;)
Also, your right, there should be more fractureshipping fics! So I wrote my own story on another website called Quotev. Could you please check it out? Thanks! It would mean a lot!
P.S. It is a work in progress and hasn't been finished yet but I hope to soon!
| MyFalseTruth chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
This is just... amazing. I have never seen anybody be able to pull off a story with a five person pairing, but you just... made a masterpiece. Fractureshipping is definetly a great pairing that there needs to be more of. Although, with who is in the pairing, I can't see there being much more than lemons. Anyways, this story is awsome. I love it so much!
| Shadowsgirl09 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
HOLY SHIT THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING!
I demand more! MORE! :D You just made this Fractureshipping loving bitch happy... :D
| Mrs. Ishtar III chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Wow... Just wow. I'm going to give a my first real critique.
I love this. The whole organization factor of this. Sexual Conduct between 5 people is incredibly difficult. I wish I could write as good as you. Sex is by far the most difficult thing in the world for me to write solely because of the detail involved. I love how you did it. It looks like you really put a lot of work into this story. This parring is incredibly hard to find. I was honestly looking it up just for laughs. The way you made the plot work is phenomenal because, strangely, IT COULD HAPPEN. It's so well written. I adore how Thief Bakura gets to be the ring leader. Out of all the bakuras, (I've counted about 5, 6 depending on a few things) Thief Bakura is my all time favorite.
I do have to agree with some of the other reviewers. Some spaces between the dialogue would have made it easier to read. It is a bit hard to read at some times but it is well worth it. Write another. Please, the internet would love you forever. Pharaoh or no Pharaoh.
| The Lady Phantom 1412 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
That was delicious! XD And you're totally right not enogh fractureshipping in the world! LOL Oh and you should totally write a sequel where they do find Yami! That would be hilariously smexy! XP
Good job! )
| DemonKittyAngel chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
give me more lemons like this! Damn this is great! Love the story although the characters are... well... how did they get there! Oh well, doesn't matter. *shrugs*
| NobodiesChain chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
(melts) That was HOT! You should make a fic where they meet the pharaoh. You really should! I love your style of writing.
| Eclipse Rose chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Oh dear Ra, this is too good for me. It made my week, and that's saying something since this is the first week of University.
Thanks for the Fractureshipping, the rarest pairing in hell! I'm loving this and thus it has been faved.
| kill the drama chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
at the end when they're all on akefia everyone's doing something and then ryou's just sitting there getting his blood sucked. lmfao.
| livingthegamecalledlife chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I wish I could find more of this pairing, I am now going on the hunt for more. Awesome story by the way, I loved it!
| RoseleafISHTAR chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
*has turned into a gaint puddle of drool*
| subaru1999 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
| Kissing Serendipity chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Oh, HELL YES.
I have never read any Fractureshipping but this whole this was just SO SO HOT. GUH.
Especially baby Ryou, he is so precious he makes me melt into a puddle of goo.
3 Great fic. I love the interaction between these five.
| Precious Destiny chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Amazing! I never thought i'd see this pairing around! Truely hot, no? ;D
Very good, i'd love to read more of this 3
| rosaiem chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
That was amazing.
I agree with Rogue1979, it would be easier to read if the speech was more separated.
But otherwise... jeez. I need to actually SIGN IN for once and add you to my favorite authors list.
I love the part where Akefia flops himself down in the middle of them all. Nearly killed me. C: