ok — tried to make it all the way through this story, but i can’t. bella is incredibly dramatic in her response to lucy and this whole situation. edward thinking she’s some God for “letting him/giving him his son” … BARF. he has a right to do whatever he wants, she’s not his warden.

really poorly written Bella character. also the grammatical errors made this impossible to get through.

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Nunca li história que a Bella tem uma gravidez saudável tendo engravidado de um Edward vampiro
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THANK YOU for helping me feel less crazy about how Edward talks about his attraction to Bella in the books. In Twilight, he just says, "I may not be human, but I am a man," as if men just are attracted to any woman. Nothing specific to make Bella feel like SHE, specifically, was attractive to him. Words of affirmation is not his love language... Of course Bella would feel self conscious and doubt his attraction!

Amo suas histórias, sempre volto para reler, porque a maturidade e desenvoltura aos personagens, com ótimos enredos é simplesmente cativante.

This was such a great story! You are an excellent writer! I’ve enjoyed both stories of yours I’ve read and can’t wait to read more! I hope you keep writing! I can’t seem to put your work down once I’ve started! Thank you!

He has no right to be jealous when he’s the one who slept with someone else and even got the bitch pregnant

Well, I’m actually glad his bastard son is going to die soon. If only the bastard great-grandchildren suffered their demise, this story would be so much better

Right “rolls my eyes” it’s not right to sleep with Bella but he was able to have sex with someone else.
Makes perfect sense (not)

She used you? Bitch, please. You were a willing participant in this. You were very happy to put your dick inside her. So don’t say she “used you”, because she didn’t

I can’t believe she was stupid enough to take his sorry ass back. She should have left the bastard and start a new life with someone else. Someone who doesn’t lie to her

There’s not technically here. He slept with the girl, put his dick inside her vagina and got her pregnant. He’s not a virgin, no matter what he’s trying to tell Bella or should I say lie to her

re-reading this story and it's as good as it was the first time! I love the e-povs at the end, but I would love this chapters in epov too. Actually, I would love the whole story in epov, if u would want to revive it.

I disliked human Bella very much. The wolf attack on Abbey and Bella had my heart racing with fear. What a piece of work Lucy was, nasty conniving girl. A great story :-)

I’ve just had a reread of this, for the nth time and I love it just as much as the first time around. :)

omg so loved this story! i could read 24 more chapters with no problem. i do think my favorite parts are death of the book and the port-a-potties lol.