Reviews for Blood Lines
blueskyhigh chapter 9 . 11/26/2022
ok — tried to make it all the way through this story, but i can’t. bella is incredibly dramatic in her response to lucy and this whole situation. edward thinking she’s some God for “letting him/giving him his son” … BARF. he has a right to do whatever he wants, she’s not his warden.

really poorly written Bella character. also the grammatical errors made this impossible to get through.
Camila0803 chapter 24 . 10/19/2022
Amei amei amei
Nunca li história que a Bella tem uma gravidez saudável tendo engravidado de um Edward vampiro
amiebb chapter 5 . 8/20/2022
THANK YOU for helping me feel less crazy about how Edward talks about his attraction to Bella in the books. In Twilight, he just says, "I may not be human, but I am a man," as if men just are attracted to any woman. Nothing specific to make Bella feel like SHE, specifically, was attractive to him. Words of affirmation is not his love language... Of course Bella would feel self conscious and doubt his attraction!
santoskamilla.14 chapter 1 . 8/7/2022
Amo suas histórias, sempre volto para reler, porque a maturidade e desenvoltura aos personagens, com ótimos enredos é simplesmente cativante.
Jillgrab chapter 24 . 3/14/2022
This was such a great story! You are an excellent writer! I’ve enjoyed both stories of yours I’ve read and can’t wait to read more! I hope you keep writing! I can’t seem to put your work down once I’ve started! Thank you!
Vero Diaz chapter 9 . 3/5/2022
He has no right to be jealous when he’s the one who slept with someone else and even got the bitch pregnant
Vero Diaz chapter 8 . 3/5/2022
Well, I’m actually glad his bastard son is going to die soon. If only the bastard great-grandchildren suffered their demise, this story would be so much better
Vero Diaz chapter 5 . 3/5/2022
Right “rolls my eyes” it’s not right to sleep with Bella but he was able to have sex with someone else.
Makes perfect sense (not)
Vero Diaz chapter 3 . 3/5/2022
She used you? Bitch, please. You were a willing participant in this. You were very happy to put your dick inside her. So don’t say she “used you”, because she didn’t
Vero Diaz chapter 2 . 3/5/2022
I can’t believe she was stupid enough to take his sorry ass back. She should have left the bastard and start a new life with someone else. Someone who doesn’t lie to her
Vero Diaz chapter 1 . 3/5/2022
There’s not technically here. He slept with the girl, put his dick inside her vagina and got her pregnant. He’s not a virgin, no matter what he’s trying to tell Bella or should I say lie to her
tett20 chapter 15 . 1/18/2022
re-reading this story and it's as good as it was the first time! I love the e-povs at the end, but I would love this chapters in epov too. Actually, I would love the whole story in epov, if u would want to revive it.
Toni Masen chapter 24 . 10/15/2021
I disliked human Bella very much. The wolf attack on Abbey and Bella had my heart racing with fear. What a piece of work Lucy was, nasty conniving girl. A great story :-)
Lizzie Paige chapter 24 . 10/14/2021
I’ve just had a reread of this, for the nth time and I love it just as much as the first time around. :)
americannight99 chapter 24 . 8/27/2021
omg so loved this story! i could read 24 more chapters with no problem. i do think my favorite parts are death of the book and the port-a-potties lol.
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