Reviews for Blood Lines
Fleur50 chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Guest chapter 18 . 1/28/2014
I don't understand why Bella had still an issue with Lucy. She took advantage of Edward's head injury and forced herself on him. Would have been the roles reversed everyone would have screemed rape immediately. No wonder he didn't kept that memory. Yes he fathered a child with that manipulative self-centered nightmare of a woman but I would have been so hurt about Bella's doubts. She made it look like no single parent is able to have a second family. And Edward didn't even had that with Lucy. And by the way, the whole Jacob debacle was much, much, much more worse than Edward's encounter with Lucy.
Otaku Mama1 chapter 24 . 1/3/2014
Wow, another fabulous story. You are very clever and a truly gifted writer.
MaryMary123 chapter 22 . 1/1/2014
Really wonderful story. I loved reading this from beginning to end.
MaryMary123 chapter 21 . 1/1/2014
what a chapter. I had hoped they would have a second baby since Abbey went well. Oh well.
MaryMary123 chapter 20 . 1/1/2014
oh no.. He went after Bella.
MaryMary123 chapter 19 . 1/1/2014
You deserve an award for the writing in this. So much love and emotion. VERY GOOD JOB
MaryMary123 chapter 17 . 1/1/2014
again reading and smiling.
MaryMary123 chapter 16 . 1/1/2014
you write a good story. Happy and silly and yet grown up.. Thank you.
MaryMary123 chapter 15 . 1/1/2014
ahh. what baby indeed.
MaryMary123 chapter 13 . 1/1/2014
so cute.. Is it too soon? Get married first.. LOL
Guest chapter 24 . 12/16/2013
This was more true to how Bella and Edward should have grown and matured. I also think that Abbey was a better mix of human and vampire, much more believable. Thanks - Xanath
Caz1105 chapter 24 . 11/10/2013
Brilliant again as I've read it for the 4th time. Loved it, loved it, loved it xxx
1tinac chapter 24 . 11/7/2013
Oh I so love love and love your stories. Thanks for sharing
crazymama chapter 24 . 10/21/2013
That was a really sweet story. I really related with them both at current stages. Some of the angst of wanting to do right by the ones you love, especially when something you did turned out to hurt that someone... And Bella's post-baby angst over her body... shoot, I still feel that way sometimes, and its been years. You have helped me see that I need to let go of that fear. Thank you. It was enlightening watching their communication level improve as they learned to trust each other and give up their fears.
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