what a touching and poignant chapter. i'm so glad he got to know his son a little bit...

since this is the last chapter i have time to read today, it is fitting that i leave her at such a cliffie! wow! and the intensity of their growing closeness was very nicely written. i felt every urge!

what more can I say. i've not read any other story exactly like this one. it is a joy to read.

a chill goes over me and tears come. what a poignant moment here where Edward meets his son! This is really a lovely story! I hope you know that there are still people reading your work...

What a sweet story this is! I wonder if any of his descendants will have red hair and green eyes.

I bet she's going to suggest he look up his relatives...maybe he can pose as his own descendant!

This is an interesting take on canon. I really am enjoying it and can't wait to see where it goes...

I've had this story on my TBR list for years! It's time I read it! Love the first chapter! Do you still read reviews?

Bella's pissing me off. She's being such a bitch. I mean I understand why she should be pisses but she's taking it to the extreme.

Lovely ending to a wonderful story! Thank you for writing and sharing your story. I really enjoyed reading it.

This is an beautiful story
I love it

LAWWWD! that took me by surprise. my mind kept going: "she's a vamp back for Edward." but then Bella standing over a terrified Edward was my favorite part by far.

This story is bullshit. Look I get that it's fanfiction and your supposed to let your imagination run wild but fuck dude you can't just turn Edward into a completely different person and try to follow the story plot. Just no, go to hell.

I can't tell you how much I loved your story, how emotional and swoon worthy this Edward was for me, I enjoyed so much his process of fatherhood so much that I wish Abbey had had more siblings.
Maybe you can write another chapter with the grandchildren in it, it would be awesome.
Thank you for your beautiful story

Great story