Reviews for Blood Lines
sfspeedy chapter 24 . 6/28/2013
Lovely story! Thank you.
Smusic F. Reader chapter 24 . 6/28/2013
I love, love, love this story!
DawnLeon chapter 18 . 6/27/2013
I got your story from a fb page and I'm loving it! Tho I thought Bella over react a bit in the beginning, everything worked out fantastic!
Now question! When Edward went back for Bella to the library In their Xmas shopping

"Bella, did you ... ?" He didn't finish but somehow his face seemed to go a little paler. He closed his eyes and he never finished that question. Instead he asked another. "Can we go home now, please?" his voice was slightly strained."

What was that about!?
OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Oooooooo, I'm liking this one!
Smusic F. Reader chapter 22 . 6/22/2013
I LOVED THIS STORY! My favorite part of this chapter was when he told her that she was the Lion and he the Lamb. Love this Vampward! So glad I read the story!
Smusic F. Reader chapter 21 . 6/22/2013
That was such a beautifully done chapter. Knowing that she was going to die and being able to calmly plan her transformation made so much more sense.
Smusic F. Reader chapter 15 . 6/20/2013
Oh no! I had a feeling Charlie would find out that way!
Smusic F. Reader chapter 12 . 6/19/2013
That answers another question I was thinking about.
Smusic F. Reader chapter 11 . 6/19/2013
OMG! Are they? Really?
Smusic F. Reader chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
Loved the stories from Edward's past.
Smusic F. Reader chapter 3 . 6/18/2013
That would make so much sense for people he went to school with to be searching for him.

I can't believe how shallow Lucy was. I'm so glad that he didn't know about George all those years ago. But now I am curious about George. Would he look like Edward?
Smusic F. Reader chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
I understand Bella's need to get things straight in her mind and am glad that she took some time to herself. I think that she was able to come to the conclusions that she did because she had to focus on herself and not on Edward. Now the healing can begin.
Smusic F. Reader chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
What a perfect title for this chapter! I did NOT see that coming!
tunsia chapter 24 . 6/17/2013
Lovely lovely story!
MiserysMama chapter 24 . 6/2/2013
I liked your version of a pregnant Bella better than SM's. Her's was just a little too gory. Seeing B/E grow and mature in your story seemed a lot more realistic. Plus, Jacob didn't imprint on a baby! You're a good writer, you put a lot of thought into this and it shows. Thank you for sharing and making it hard to tear myself away from it. I enjoyed it very much.
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