Reviews for Blood Lines |
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winnodinno chapter 9 . 5/23/2013 oooooh... that kind of impaled you mean. Not impaled, impaled by Mike's actual pole per say. LOL |
xxeverlastinglovexx chapter 24 . 5/22/2013 Found this three days ago and it's taken over my life since. I've just finished reading it. I loved every second! I haven't read a vampire Edward in so long, and I usually dislike stories featuring the Cullens as vampires as there are usually so many inconsistencies with what they can do, but not in this story. I think you know Edward better than SM knows him. Thanks for Sharing it! Eve. X |
KNG1986 chapter 18 . 5/18/2013 What's the use having a doctor in the family if he's away for your baby's birth? They seemed to do an amazing job on their own. I loved them remembering their first kiss. |
KNG1986 chapter 17 . 5/18/2013 "I can be very creative, Bella." That got my imagination going. |
Scarlet3086 chapter 16 . 5/4/2013 I loved shy Edward with the baby names! |
Vbabe184 chapter 24 . 5/4/2013 Oh goodness! That was just lovely! That's exactly how the Twilight universe should have gone about. :) I really enjoyed how you tied in many canon elements in the story. It made this feel very believable and enjoyable. This could have easily ended and felt complete with chapter twenty-two, but I'm grateful that you continued it with the two-part epilogue. It was great juicy cherry on top of a lovely fanfic. Great work, all around! |
TheObsessed1 chapter 24 . 5/3/2013 This was such a wonderful story. Their lives, like all of us; weren't perfect but just right for them. Of course all that money made a lot of those things easier! This was not a sappy overdone soap opera HEA. It was true in it's sentiments about what a real happy life could entail. Family and loved ones together is something, hopefully; all of us could obtain. It's a wonderful dream. |
wistful reader chapter 24 . 5/2/2013 I absolutely LOVED this story! You kept the characters real and very close to the originals but you were able to give them a normal human side. I love how not everything is drama but more like day to day life (well for vampires,.. lol) I loved the original series but I always felt they lacked real or normal emotions, everything was more like over the top teenage angst... I seriously loved how you were able to add down to earth situations, feelings and reactions to the characters... lol.. to wrap it up.. I LOVED your story! Great job! |
wistful reader chapter 16 . 5/1/2013 I LOVED this chapter! Such a nice, warm, loving and natural side of the characters. I remember acting like this w/my hubby when I was pregnant! Such a loving chapter! Great job! |
KNG1986 chapter 14 . 4/25/2013 "Alice," he twisted around to look at her. "You had the wedding," he turned back to me and smiled. "This one's ours. My favorite part of a lovely chapter |
KNG1986 chapter 9 . 4/22/2013 I love the visual of a shirtless, pajama clad Edward pushing his boundaries with an very willing Bella, also shirtless. Too bad she had to be impaled by Mike, whose days may be numbered. |
KNG1986 chapter 4 . 4/21/2013 I'm a little proud of Bella. She gets it now. Seeing the Beatles twice in Philly in 1964 & 1965 was very much like Edward described but I was a very young teenage girl so it was also extremely exciting. |
KNG1986 chapter 3 . 4/21/2013 A Snoopy shirt? hee hee. That horrible girl practically raped him. I guess in 1918 they didn't understand what NO meant. I think Edward needed consoling. If I had a boyfriend that lived that long, I would have been asking him what it was like living in each of those decades from the beginning. |
KNG1986 chapter 2 . 4/21/2013 I would be surprised, maybe a little jealous of the hussy until I got me some too but it was over 80 years ago. Get over it. I think I would be more excited than anything. I mean WOW, my vampire boyfriend had a living grandchild! I like it. I found this through a facebook group Twilight FanFiction Recommendations (Completed) |
PeelmeagrapeNYC chapter 24 . 4/15/2013 This is truly special and I enjoyed every chapter! |