Reviews for Blood Lines
okay chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
Ok so basically Edward is sexually assaulted/raped and Bella gets jealous/mad at him? That's bullshit. Good writing and all, but the plot is bullshit.
JustMePMM chapter 16 . 4/18/2017
I just had a thought about Spring, the painting and the baby duck blanket!,, someone is coming early?..
celajwhitney chapter 19 . 4/16/2017
wonderful chapter.
celajwhitney chapter 13 . 4/16/2017
they are just to cute!
celajwhitney chapter 8 . 4/16/2017
that was a very lovely chapter. poor edward to be used by lucy like that and to have a child he never knew about must have totally shattered everything he believed about himself. he probably felt like a rapist since he couldn't remember what had happened all those years ago. it's wonderful that he took the time to tell george the truth about where and why he came to be. it's to bad at the age of eighty-nine? that george met the father he never knew about until he was literally on his death bed. but, then again, better late than never.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/15/2017
So no vampire George! Lol
JustMePMM chapter 4 . 4/15/2017
Cant wait to meet George
JustMePMM chapter 2 . 4/14/2017
Wow I'm loving this story! You really do capture human emotion perfectly. Can't wait to read on
cjj chapter 24 . 4/6/2017
amazing, beautiful story, you are an amazing writer, with great sense of humor and right beautiful words and emotions. thank you for sharing this wit us. :-)
chasinge chapter 24 . 2/25/2017
Wow. That was a beautiful story. I absolutely love the ending. The whole thing was just a gift. Thank you!
Guest chapter 24 . 2/22/2017
I loved reading this story...
Especially Edward's p.o.v. takes.
Thank you
PAT2024 chapter 24 . 1/16/2017
Thank you so much for this wonderfull love story. It was less fantastic, spectacular, adventurous and with less drama than the original, but on the other end, you made them even more humans. You were really great at explaining in depth their feelings and reactions, making their love even more tangible. I loved George and Rebecca (nice plot there). I always felt that Renesmee had been robbed of her childhood, it was great that they could enjoy Abbey as a kid much longer.
It is also very well written and i really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Will you write a sequel one day. I'd love to know what happens with the V and with A growing up..
Carla Gasperoni chapter 24 . 12/26/2016
Wow! This story is beautiful in every way.
Hope you had a Merry XMAS with your family.
Great job and so well written.
Thank you.
sab31897 chapter 3 . 11/21/2016
Omg... 70s Eddie. Oh god. That's so cute
hot4edward chapter 6 . 11/7/2016
Am loving the story so far . Hate to remind you, but Edward was changed when he was seventeen, not eighteen.
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