|Reviews for Blood Lines|
| Smusic F. Reader chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
I understand Bella's need to get things straight in her mind and am glad that she took some time to herself. I think that she was able to come to the conclusions that she did because she had to focus on herself and not on Edward. Now the healing can begin.
| Smusic F. Reader chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
What a perfect title for this chapter! I did NOT see that coming!
| tunsia chapter 24 . 6/17/2013
Lovely lovely story!
| MiserysMama chapter 24 . 6/2/2013
I liked your version of a pregnant Bella better than SM's. Her's was just a little too gory. Seeing B/E grow and mature in your story seemed a lot more realistic. Plus, Jacob didn't imprint on a baby! You're a good writer, you put a lot of thought into this and it shows. Thank you for sharing and making it hard to tear myself away from it. I enjoyed it very much.
| not done baking chapter 24 . 5/23/2013
Such a terrible story to find during finals season. Read it in three days and I enjoyed every moment of it. Extremely well written. I like how you stayed with the canon of the story regarding their personalities but still made their personalities change, and if we're being honest, improve. I've actually never seen that done in a fanfic, so great job. I'm sad to see this one end, but it didn't slow me down!
| winnodinno chapter 9 . 5/23/2013
oooooh... that kind of impaled you mean. Not impaled, impaled by Mike's actual pole per say. LOL
| xxeverlastinglovexx chapter 24 . 5/22/2013
Found this three days ago and it's taken over my life since. I've just finished reading it. I loved every second! I haven't read a vampire Edward in so long, and I usually dislike stories featuring the Cullens as vampires as there are usually so many inconsistencies with what they can do, but not in this story. I think you know Edward better than SM knows him.
Thanks for Sharing it!
| KNG1986 chapter 18 . 5/18/2013
What's the use having a doctor in the family if he's away for your baby's birth? They seemed to do an amazing job on their own. I loved them remembering their first kiss.
| KNG1986 chapter 17 . 5/18/2013
"I can be very creative, Bella." That got my imagination going.
| Scarlet3086 chapter 16 . 5/4/2013
I loved shy Edward with the baby names!
| Vbabe184 chapter 24 . 5/4/2013
Oh goodness! That was just lovely! That's exactly how the Twilight universe should have gone about. :) I really enjoyed how you tied in many canon elements in the story. It made this feel very believable and enjoyable. This could have easily ended and felt complete with chapter twenty-two, but I'm grateful that you continued it with the two-part epilogue. It was great juicy cherry on top of a lovely fanfic. Great work, all around!
| TheObsessed1 chapter 24 . 5/3/2013
This was such a wonderful story. Their lives, like all of us; weren't perfect but just right for them. Of course all that money made a lot of those things easier! This was not a sappy overdone soap opera HEA. It was true in it's sentiments about what a real happy life could entail. Family and loved ones together is something, hopefully; all of us could obtain. It's a wonderful dream.
| m2r2a chapter 24 . 5/2/2013
I absolutely LOVED this story! You kept the characters real and very close to the originals but you were able to give them a normal human side. I love how not everything is drama but more like day to day life (well for vampires,.. lol) I loved the original series but I always felt they lacked real or normal emotions, everything was more like over the top teenage angst... I seriously loved how you were able to add down to earth situations, feelings and reactions to the characters... lol.. to wrap it up.. I LOVED your story! Great job!
| m2r2a chapter 16 . 5/1/2013
I LOVED this chapter! Such a nice, warm, loving and natural side of the characters. I remember acting like this w/my hubby when I was pregnant! Such a loving chapter! Great job!
| KNG1986 chapter 14 . 4/25/2013
"Alice," he twisted around to look at her. "You had the wedding," he turned back to me and smiled. "This one's ours. My favorite part of a lovely chapter