| Reviews for Blood Lines |
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   mibow chapter 24 . 5/12/2019 this was so good. what a great edward & bella! |
| FireRose77 chapter 3 . 4/13/2019 One BIG detail here... he's sick but he's still 16... Not even June yet... He and Elizabeth Masen got sick on the 2nd wave some moths after the spring wave that took Edward Masen Sr. |
| Sukiethree chapter 1 . 3/9/2019 It doesnt matter how often I read this this; I love it every time. Parts of it still being years to my eyes; how much love there is between Edward and Bella. I love how adult she is, looking at the reality instead of in the typical teenage way. Beautiful story just finished for the fifth time. Whenever I want a good canon vamp story, it’s yours I turn to. That’s why I haven’t written one yet - I’m not sure I’d be able to do it justice. Now I’m waiting in Eight Days |
| MsLiss chapter 24 . 2/17/2019 Non stop reading Love love Thank you |
| MsLiss chapter 22 . 2/16/2019 Amazing thank you |
| MsLiss chapter 11 . 2/16/2019 Perfect |
| MsLiss chapter 7 . 2/16/2019 Ok firstly I can’t believe I haven’t read this before And I was thinking the same thing ! George can’t talk He can tell him And you did an awesome job with the meet n greet Thank you |
| Christine1234 chapter 2 . 1/21/2019 What a concept! This is so different from the rest of the stories and I am so excited to dive in and read this story you’ve created! |
| Scarlett J. Abner chapter 24 . 1/12/2019 I don't think I've ever read a story like this one before. You managed to fix all the issues with Twilight while keeping the character's identity and not sacrificing their personality and beliefs in favour of solving the clear and abundant problems; Edward and Bella's relationship has been romanticized for all the wrong reasons and it's just so amazing and satisfying to read how you expanded their story and made their love healthy and strong, like it should have been. I think this was a terrific story and that you made an amazing job telling it. |
| robsessed73 chapter 1 . 11/5/2018 Wasn't Edward 17 when the influenza hit? And you said he had sex with Lucy a month before he was infected? So even if he had sex with Lucy the day he turned 17 then she would have given birth at 7 months. Was Edward even the father or was she with another but put the whole thing on Edward? |
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/27/2018 I loved, loved, loved it! The way you skipped time was very unique. A few times it took a second to figure out the time change but, to me, it made it more interesting. I like the way Edward and Bella were finally able to 'work things out', leaving the past behind, mostly, and become a greater whole. It's nice to see Abbey being a real baby, both for her, and her parents. As sharp as she is, I think she's going to speed up her growth as time goes by. Hopefully their plan for the Volturi will work as they hope. |
| Kageyjay chapter 18 . 7/25/2018 What a difference! I think this one is very much believable. (Well except for the vampire of course!) I love how their relationship has grown through the trials. I love this Edward. He learns! |
| Carla Gasperoni chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 BEAUTIFUL! |
| Ruby2sday chapter 24 . 5/18/2018 This was one of the best stories EVER! I would love to see it made into a movie. Thanks for a wonderful read, Ruby2sday |
| Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 1 . 5/15/2018 Love this |