Holy cow that was hot! Phew! Loved this so much. You really captured their personalities so well and ran with them to make them better. The funniest scenarios just popping up so randomly was delightful! Such an amazing job. Thank you!

Did he not climb trees with her on his back and call her a spider monkey. I know it happened in the movie but its been a long time since the books. At first I thought he would correct her (faulty memory) but...

Hahahah say hello to grandma! hahahah! Go Edward!

Oh no oh no...

Haha I absolutely love playful Cullen men!

I love how you captured all Bella's weird sounds when she speaks. And how you have kept Edward shy. Hes changed so much (for the better) but his unchanging shyness is really enligtening.

Haha poor Alice. A simpler solution would have been to let Alice decorate at the Cullen house while Edward and Bella choose a design for their cottage. Alice gets her monster scary Angel Suite and Bella and Edward get adorable and simple!

Aww Edward saying Hello to her belly is nust adorable!

Well played, Edward!

Haha stupid bug!

i really loved this story! so very well done

this story has been so amazing, i loved it!

Thank you for an amazing story. It was so well written. I'm glad I found this gem. I wish there was more chapters. Maybe something about Abbey as a grown up? I'll just have to imagine it.

Loved every bit of this story, amazing thanks for your writing

Ok so basically Edward is sexually assaulted/raped and Bella gets jealous/mad at him? That's bullshit. Good writing and all, but the plot is bullshit.