|Reviews for Blood Lines|
| ChieriAn9eL chapter 11 . 7/4/2009
Between Charlie and Edward, who were now united in their dislike of Mike Newton, I'd barely been allowed to lift a finger or move out the front door.
I wondered if I should send Mike Newton a thank you card.- HAHAHA... I love all the irony surrounding Mike Newton, who is pretty much clueless (except for knowing that Edward hates him with a passion.)
o.. I didn't see this twist coming.. I thought doing things in "proper" order sounded right, but this works too... It's not about deals anymore...Bella really wants to marry him now, and it's not about a physical age difference... so I guess it's ok to go with the moment. ;)
| chaosdiy chapter 11 . 7/4/2009
oh please.. what an immature, whiny drama queen.. I don't know whyEdward is so stupid... he should just get over her.. she's not even worth it.. unless he likes someone who's always such a bitch to him. *gag* yeah... his loss.. cuz Bella the tramp is SO amazing... oh please let Edward find someone better.. it's so disgusting to watch him go crazy for trash like that
| 4everhis91 chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
Thank goodness you updated! I had been watchubng and waiting :) However after this wonderful chapter the wait for the nest one is going to be even harder :) I really love this entire story how you have taken our beloved characters and not changed who they are but instead added more death into their lives and into each one of them. Thank you so much and keep up the good work ...and hurry please :)
| 8sanny8 chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
I enjoyed every single word of this chapter. It's the best I've ever read, please go on soon - and please don't let me wait too long.
thanks for writing this story
| M-Carol chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
please update soon!
| ProfileRemoved.com chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
aww, how sweet was Edward in that chapter, please update really soon...
| Poettic Hartt chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
wow, what a cliffie.
| LoveMeSomeEdwardCullen chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
This is such a wonderful story and very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| joayla chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
really great as usual beautifully written please update soon it was a bit of a cliff hanger !
| Laurrrr chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
| TwilightMomofTwo chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
This was a yet another great chapter in a great story. I really like how you ended it with a little cliffie, and can hardly wait for you to update.
Edward and Bella really had some growing up to do, and your story provided a perfect opportunity for that. I can see a deepening of the relationship through the words you put on page, and finally, an acceptance of Bella's wishes, without an urge from Edward to override them. He seems to finally allow himself to cherish the gift he's been given, and has opened himself up to fully receive it.
The conversation at the end was poignant - that part is one of the things I hated about Eclipse (and this from the person who's writing a retelling in EPOV, but that's another story).
You are doing a wonderful job.
| teambellaedward chapter 11 . 7/3/2009
that was cool :)
| Gyreflight chapter 10 . 6/30/2009
Beautifully observed and described, emotion, reaction and perception all woven seamlessly together with a light, skilled touch that is a pleasure to read. It’s so well done, in fact, that I went back and read it again when I reached the end, because I didn’t really want to let them go.
Your characterisations were delicately drawn out, and felt both true and real, as you gave Bella and Edward the chance to work through a different kind of crisis to emerge on the other side stronger and surer in themselves and each other.
I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Thanks for the read.
| 4everhis91 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
just checking for new posts.. cant wait to read more :)
| Dr. Fang's Girl chapter 10 . 6/29/2009
that was so good! and it was really, really well written! are you gonna keep going with the story?