|Reviews for Blood Lines|
| gemin chapter 6 . 6/24/2009
I can't believe how freaking good this story is. George was great. And I'm hoping that they can meet again. I don't want it to be over. I would love it if Edward could tell him the truth, tell him that he's his father.
| gemin chapter 5 . 6/24/2009
Oh my God, my heart is bursting. I'm about to cry here, this is so amazing. Edward meeting his son. Just wow. I love it. I cannot wait to see what happens.
| gemin chapter 4 . 6/23/2009
Seriously this chapter takes my breath away. It was what I always wanted from canon, some history about Edward... just small things like you did. Incidents throughout his life. And I adore you for giving that to me... us. hah. This makes me love him all the more. I could cry. The snoopy shirt, the flowers, the written memories, the baseball game challenge, aw god all of it, I lapped it all up. Dude, Stephenie Meyer would eat this shit up! If this isn't canonward, I don't know what is. Also I want so badly to visit New Zealand. Just hearing mention of it makes my heart ache and soar. It is one of my many dream places to live.
| gemin chapter 3 . 6/23/2009
Hah! That's awesome, I love that Bella googled him. That's a first, that I've seen anyway... and it makes total friggin sense. I get so lost in your writing, when I was reading Lucy's words I was immersed in 1918. It's safe to say I'm already addicted.
| gemin chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Whew, so interesting. I can't wait to read on.
| Ash-rider-in-the-dark chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
were in the world did you find out about the 1937 Bugatti 57S Atalante Coupe?
| citychick chapter 9 . 6/18/2009
Great chapter and once again we sit in suspense waiting for the next chapter. Can't wait! please update soon.
| ChieriAn9eL chapter 9 . 6/17/2009
I read everything all at once... I wish I had time to go back and review every chapter... one day, I will. I was wary of this story at first... I was afraid that it'd be another one of those Edward lied about having a human love and blahblahblah.. but this is different... I could see why he wouldn't remember or bring it up- it wasn't memorable or significant at all. And once the truth was out, my heart just broke for him... again. I'm so glad they were able to connect. Edward was able to share his past and fears, and Bella understood, rather than brushing them off and thinking only of herself. Thanks for redeeming Bella in my eyes. I was quite put off by how self-absorbed she was in the books. Edward is such a complex and intriguing characters- but instead of learning more about his past and how he became the man he was, she just drooled over him... and fed his insecurities.
| teambellaedward chapter 9 . 6/16/2009
| PetChicken chapter 9 . 6/16/2009
I don't think I can express in words how this story has moved me. I began reading from Chapter 1 earlier tonight, then was interrupted and couldn't wait to get back in front of my computer to finish the last 5 chapters. This story has made me laugh, cry, made my hormones rage like a teenager, and now I'm in utter suspense as I wait for the next incredible chapter to explain what happened to Bella. You definitely have a writing gift, and I can't wait to read what happens next.
| xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxv chapter 9 . 6/16/2009
| Keira Eve MacDonnell chapter 9 . 6/16/2009
I'm really enjoying your story. I like the idea of discovering more about Edward. In the books it always seemed like it was all about Bella or just the vampire side of Edward.
Great cliff hanger. Will the change happen sooner?
| bitty91 chapter 9 . 6/16/2009
| Poettic Hartt chapter 9 . 6/16/2009
wow. I like this story alot. Usually i really dont like the fanfics that condradict the pasts of the Cullens, but this is really creative, and I like how its playing out.
| Laurrrr chapter 9 . 6/16/2009
He's awesomee.. he's getting nicer.
I LOVE HIM TO
HE CANT DIE