Reviews for Alone With You
Sunnykisses chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Good story, real. Just a few things: the beginning was written very well, but I couldn't help but have rather read the story if it was in first person. The ending was fine, but I could have done without the exclamation points. Now, the middle. There were some punctuation errors to look over, and in one particular paragraph the verb tense is odd, you use 'would' a lot when it shouldn't be.I didn't think Taylor had to have been crying, but I like how Chad acted. I thought the whole 'taking off the clothes' part went by real fast and was kind of unemotional. Also, I think Chad would ask if Taylor was okay with having sex before he even put her on the bed.
Makesense chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I liked this one, it cute and very good :) xx
DrakesWifeyKris chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
nice...go Chaylor!
CuteANDSexxxy17 chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Wow.. That was beautiful! Great JOB! I really love how open Chad was with Tay, and the love between them was so steamy.. VERY WELL DONE!

Please keep making more stories, I really love it! :)
ChaylorTwilightQueen10 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
omg that was so awesome! i really loved it tons. amazing one-shot, so romantic and HOT! lol update soon
general wildcat chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Aw, that's such a sweet story. Talk about a dream come true. What a happy ending!
MermaidRam85 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
I loved it. Please write more Chaylors!