|Reviews for Imprisoned|
| Xiaou Nem chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
For me, this was a bit over-the-top. But that's just my feeling, today.
I like the scene with Emily looking into the mirror and tracing the scars.
| KingKillerq chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Awesome. Heartbreakingly sad but awesome. Imprinting is so... disgusting in its implicates.
Did I spell that right?
| Emerald Ashes chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
This is so wonderfully twisted, and there's a strange satisfaction in watching Emily take her revenge. Thanks for the read!
| SummonerDagger88 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
I've always thought that the characters from the Twilight saga, would have been very likable and realistic if someone with talent would have written those books.
All of your Twilight fics, prove that theory
| TiGeRzYi chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Hasn't it occurred to Emily that Sam doesn't really need or even want her forgiveness. He just wants his fantasy, Emily's thoughts and feeling be damned all she really doing is giving him what he wants and prolonging her own suffering. Many abusers are completely aware that their victims aren't happy to be with them but the only thing that really matters to them is that their wants/needs are meet regardless of the pain they cause others. Threatening harm and suicide is one of the classic tricks in the abusers arsenal to try and make their victims feel responsible for their abusers well-being.
I don't think Emily's really thought through her lil' revenge scheme cause I can only see two people suffering in this story and Sam isn't one of them.
Excellent story regardless, well done
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
If Sam really loved Emily, he would have killed himself before clawing her face. Srsly, Emily, go get some plastic surgery, and if you are afraid Sam will kill you, kill him first.
| Kereea chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
This is pure awesome. The way Emily had her revenge all planned out, how if she's going to be stuck she'll be stuck with dignity...I loved it.
| BELAVERA chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Wow, they seem to be rather rough on each other! They should try to help each other more, because it won't be long before real bitterness comes to their hearts. I also think that this is lacking true maturity. Accepting what is in the past (& forgiving each other) is true happiness & maturity. Sam is still put out that he had to leave Leah, so he is taking his rage out on Emily- passive resistance. When they hold such bitterness in their hearts, it will soon eat them alive! Emily thinks she will be happier when she controls him, but she will never be happy. All three of them should be so intelligent, but they are all acting stupid...
| V Tsuion chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Well done! It takes something that is never explored and makes a genuinely beautiful story out of it!
| Kittenn1011 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Somehow, you managed to make me feel sorry for Emily. Out of all characters in Twilight, I've always hated her the most. What she did to Leah, and how she accepted Sam... she disgusted me. Your interpretation is great, and it makes me pity Emily just as much as I hate her. Good job.
| SlowMovingTime chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Wow...this never actually occurred to me. But I can definitely see this. Thank you, you definitely made me think about this relationship more.
| RuinWitch chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Wow. This really gives a different perspective on the girls who are imprinted on by the pack.
I love how you characterized Emily. Everyone assumed she loved Sam because she stayed with him, but no one considers that she might be doing it to make him feel guilty.
In short, I loved it. :)
| Anime-StarWars-fan-zach chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
My my! How interesting! A great take on Emily, to be sure. I rather enjoyed reading this. Great job!
| writer on the run chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Again, you find some sort of realisim in these books. Brilliant, just brilliant.
| LightTheWay333 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Oh Leah... SAM! HOW COULD YOU?