Reviews for Empty
VolturiQueen9812 chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
So creative how she can have any power she wants
Hero Dean chapter 9 . 8/3/2013
I don't see why not bella punch the girl or say I am daughter of aro
InactiveAccount5529 chapter 3 . 1/26/2013
I do like the idea for the story but your writing and grammar need a little work, no offence. But when I was writing my story someone called me out on my work and it heped my writing. Love the idea though.
Olivia chapter 9 . 8/21/2012
No offence but all your stories end crappy because YOU lost interest so I'm not bothering to read any more of your stories if there gonna end te same way
Myra Bones chapter 9 . 7/25/2012
I think you might mean 'mock my house' since mocking is calling something/someone names etc. and knocking is 'knock on the door' with a fist or something. Otherwise good story.
Kolista chapter 9 . 10/23/2011
this is a good story you really do a sceond book of it i love to see how things with aro and edward has well has edward and bella work out if you you need ideas i could if you want
ClumsyShopaholic chapter 9 . 1/4/2011
Cant wait to read more! love the story and this chapter! xoxox
Izzycullen6 chapter 9 . 11/12/2010
evfangirl98 chapter 9 . 6/21/2010
good but i want that 8)

topazforever chapter 9 . 4/2/2010
hey i love this story, but i dont really like that bella just took edward back, she seems kinda pathetic
stonkin chapter 2 . 3/10/2010
spelling and grammar is horrible
rosacullen chapter 9 . 3/4/2010
really nice. i thought it was cute. well the last part there. lmao earlier i thought all those years with the Voltui had turned Bella into a hard ass. but i absolutly loved it.
I-Love-PAD.FOOT-Way-MORE chapter 9 . 2/19/2010
Grovz2014 chapter 9 . 2/19/2010
I love it! is there going to be a sequel
You-won't-see-an-iguana-here chapter 9 . 2/18/2010
Aw, nice chapter. Sad it's ending. fantastic job
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