Reviews for The Broken Doll
LadyBelladona chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
"guest" its not racist...in other wolf mate stories etc whayever their mates look like they are described as looking like angels or goddesses...angels as in looking petfect and fit well for them not as in the "pure, white etc" angel...i do t know where the heck you got the race thing from.
greywindowpanes chapter 5 . 10/25/2017
The story is good so far but I really cringed at the line, "Of course, I thought wryly, blue eyes, blonde hair, white skin. The other way to describe this beautiful creature was an angel." It's pretty racist. You probably didn't mean anything by it, but it implies that whiteness is the ideal. Not good.
RavenClawRavensandSlytherins chapter 7 . 2/8/2014
Im a complege girly girl but I have huge tomboy sjde and transformers isnmy favourite movies and linkin park is my fav band! My fav is new divide numb and faint
Hero Dean chapter 25 . 12/7/2013
so when will he tell her his secret and life when will she tell him whole about her life and secrets. I love this story please and try to make the next chapter
Inactiveaccount1111111 chapter 25 . 12/5/2013
Update soonplease cant wait!
wolf-girl-only-in-my-dreams chapter 25 . 11/24/2013
Hey I loved this story. It's sad but good. So please finish. It soon. Plz plz plz plz plz.
CookieMonstersRUs chapter 25 . 11/4/2013
Oh my god Sophie. First off i really want to know how they are going to reveal their secrets. I also want to know what the heck happened to Mattie? And I'm sorry to say this but COME ON PAUL! KISS HER ALREADY! !#%!%! $%! My god YOU TOO SOPH!
DTaylor201989 chapter 25 . 8/7/2013
love this story, please update soon
JustAGirlWithALoveForFiction chapter 25 . 7/28/2013
Wow. I just read the whole thing and...yeah, wow! The plot is really well thought out, not just random like some stories! You're also a really good author, especially at descriptions. Your cliffhangers are brilliant, if annoying and I love how you really draw the story out cos' Sophie is so used to putting up walls that it would be kinda stupid if she just told Paul everything about herself right away. And it's funny cos' Sophie likes him but is scared of rejection which is ridiculous cos' Paul is her IMPRINT and is crazy about her! You have to update soon, seriously, before I go crazy! Please? (sorry for babbling)
the-compulsive-tea-drinker chapter 25 . 5/23/2013
this is such a frickin' amazing story! i love it so much! please update soon, cos i really want to know what will happen. please, please please. you are an amazing writer! i don't really know how to say how much i enjoyed this story! Bye
eliza6801 chapter 25 . 5/20/2013
Amazing and heart wrenching story!
lizzy148 chapter 25 . 3/6/2013
REALLY GOOD CHAPTER and STORY !
i LOVE it and i've ENJOYED reading it !
i need to know whats going to happen so... PLZ UPDATE SOON ! :) :)
animari93 chapter 25 . 11/19/2012
and just like that I've become follower #302
Guest chapter 25 . 8/26/2012
Aww, the story is over, isn't it?
alicatVA chapter 25 . 8/15/2012
I love your Paul because he was a bad boy and not a bully.

Please update! I would love to see where you are leading us.
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