Reviews for A Small Crack in Perfection
Insanity1614 chapter 14 . 6/7
Please update
Guest chapter 14 . 6/1
No one nine years later: ...
triforce jutsu chapter 14 . 2/21
Phenomenal writing. This is seriously top tier fanfiction content that I've ever read in my 12 years being an avid reader on this site. I don't have the words to convey the professional level prose, tone, and brilliant characterization while still remaining true to the source material. I adore the subtle thawing of Hinata, the inner turmoil in Naruto, and the complicated yet loving relationship between Naruto and Sakura. This story is a mix of realistically written romance, suspense, and witty humor. The sarcastic Naruto is the best Naruto. You're so talented that I don't really have anything to critique except a few wrong usages of "it's" and "it's." I do hope one day you finish this masterpiece, but I hope you are in good health first and foremost. Best regards.
aviesee chapter 14 . 2/17
Hmm, 2011. I guess, there's no chance of this being continued, right?
Anyway, just leaving a comment that I liked your story. Thank you!
aviesee chapter 6 . 2/16
I know this story was written years ago, but I'm just now reading it. It's developing into a good story with a nice plot. I'm only dreading that it's not yet complete.
Bluewarrior3 chapter 14 . 11/3/2019
Good story, Very good on the lemon scene, I hope you update soon, tho I’m also worried about naruto’s company, and the relationship between him and Hinata I hope it still continues to go on strong.
Bluewarrior3 chapter 12 . 11/3/2019
On 12 chapter, goin good so far:) and man ino just laid it all out there, I was very surprised actually but she was very truthful about Sakura and naruto’s breakup. The naruhina moments are cute, she’s finally opening up more to him
Bluewarrior3 chapter 4 . 11/3/2019
Brotherly love? Just put “love as a friend” naruto and sakura’s friendship shouldn’t be called brotherly love, they use to date ,they use to have sex, and they still kinda flirt with each other...
Bluewarrior3 chapter 2 . 11/2/2019
I’m sorry but I don’t see hinata and sakura being best friends,I don’t really like sakura so I guess that’s why, But I do love naruhina, and I’m mostly focusing on them two. Good story so far, still reading
Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 14 . 8/10/2019
This is one of my favorite NaruHina fics and I’m glad I found it. I’d especially like to commend the clever use of several characters (ie the Sound Five), the abilities of others (making InoShikaCho and the Sand Siblings talented hackers), hobbies of others (Naruto’s plants), and the personalities of others (Hiashi’s reasoning for what he did to Hinata, Hanabi bring a little shit, Neji being an even bigger little shit who loves and enjoys his time with his wife), etc. You put a lot of thought and effort into the plot and characterizations of everyone you involved (you even remembered Koh as a character!) and it’s so tangible in the story.
I loved it. Thanks for writing it.

Epic Otaku Cherry
KookiePie1025 chapter 14 . 1/30/2019
Wow! The pacing is just right. So creative with the way the characters are in this AU. Just the right amount of fluff, smut, drama and humour. Please please update!
NarHina chapter 14 . 12/29/2018
Damn that was hot. Please finish this amazing story like I feel blessed that you ended on the lemon, but that last line was a real cliff hanger.

Loved the story from start to finish the way Naruto and Hinata just got closer and closer was amazing and I loved every second of it.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
NarHina chapter 4 . 12/26/2018
Cute! Nice one Neji you are still one of my fav characters and now Hinata can't get away from Uzumaki. Nice going with Naruto catching her when he almost fall seeing more and more of the old Hinata that loves him makes me so hype and leaves me wanting more.

Hinata's worry for Naruto is so touching I love how she tires to act like she doesn't want him, but then goes all over him with worry whenever she thinks she hurt him.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
NarHina chapter 3 . 12/26/2018
Yes point one for Neji and Hanabi quite pleased that not all Hyuga are ok with the new Hinata. And Naruto is staying in the same place as Hinata score I can't wait to see what Naruto and Hinata get up to.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
NarHina chapter 2 . 12/26/2018
Damn they made so much progress damn Sakura she should have left it to Naruto instead of trying to push her. Now Hinata is closing herself off from them and even Naruto.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
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