Reviews for Psychedelic Life
LolaTheSa chapter 17 . 4/12
Honestly this story is fucking frustrating. You either make Bella a slut with a bitchy personality or Make her a nice girl with a easy going personality.

Don't go back and fucking forward. It's incredibly annoying and it just makes readers hate the character.
LolaTheSa chapter 16 . 4/11
Um you have to remember that you made this Bella a slut... And as Alice put it. 'runs through men like socks'... So some dialogue shouldn't be in her head with out her being a hypocrite... like calling her friend a manwhore.. When she is the same exact way..

I had thought and hopped that Bella changed in that department... but no you kept her the same way... A complete slut... and now we're suppose by all fluffy cause she wants Edward now? Hell, you made her say she had no plans on even contacting Edward just like two chapters ago.
LolaTheSa chapter 9 . 4/11
If your readers aren't aware that bella's a loose girl by now then they haven't been reading..

And I hope you know that Edward is a 'innocent little virgin' in this one...
LolaTheSa chapter 7 . 4/11
...Is that foreshadowing that Bella might miss edward if they don't hurry to Florida?
LolaTheSa chapter 6 . 4/11
...That's a attitude for a healthy relationship right there... /kappa
LolaTheSa chapter 5 . 4/11
Ok
LolaTheSa chapter 2 . 4/11
Honestly.. It appears to me she was this gigantic slut... and a bitch... and we are suppose to believe she liked him all that time?/
Jibson01 chapter 17 . 7/9/2015
Do you plan on ever updating this fic? Or what?
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 17 . 4/20/2015
well lets hope they get together forever but guess ill never are you going to finish this great story let me know THANK YOU
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 16 . 4/20/2015
NO WHY HE HANGS AROUND WITH JASPER AND ROSE AND WE KNEW THEY SMOKED I JUST WANT YOU TO FINISH THIS STORY AND BELLA AND EDWARD GETTING TOGETHER FOREVER
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 15 . 4/19/2015
NO THE CHAPTER WAS GREAT IT MADE EDWARD OPEN UP HIS EYES LETS JUST HOPE DAISY DOESNT DO ANYTHING BAD TO EDWARD LIKE SHE DID EMMETT PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU ARE GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 14 . 4/19/2015
YES BELLA IS STILL IN LOVE WITH EDWARD WHETHER SHE ADMITTS IT TO HER SELF OR NOT AND I REALLY THINK EDWARD LOVES HER TOO
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 13 . 4/19/2015
EDWARDS POV NATURALY THOSE TWO WERE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER AND ITS UP TO YOU TO GET THEMBTOGETHER AND I HOPE YOU FINISH THIS STORY SO ARE YOU PLEASE JUST TELL ME
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 12 . 4/19/2015
I CANT SEE ANYONE WANTING TO DO THAT I WOULD NEVER WANT TO BE NEAR AN ALLIGATOT WOULD YOU WONDER IF EDWARD IS THE ONE MESSING UP A HIS HOSPITAL
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 11 . 4/19/2015
THATS THE GIRL THAT HURT EMMETT AND I HAVE A QUESTION PLEASE ANSWER ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY WILL EDWARD AND BELLA EVER GET TOGETHER AS A COUPLE
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