|Reviews for Cigarette Burns|
| The ONE chapter 16 . 11/26/2011
I REALLY liked this story. It's become one of my favorites. :) Especially the whole point of Bella being a junkie and Edward a famous... guy.. It makes it so interesting! :)
| icecoldapplefangs13 chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Hey, um, I know your not dead but I prayed for you :) x
| stripes chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I hope you realize now that it's childish to take life for granted the way that you did. It's not something to be tossed around.
| getoverit chapter 16 . 10/29/2011
| Christine Simpson chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Daddy's Little Cannibal - get over yourself. You are truly sick. Nobody was forcing you to keep writing fanfiction. If you trylu wanted out of the FF scene, and had you had even an ounce of class, you would have just quietly deleted your contact info, or your fanfic account, or whatever, and stopped coming here. But no, you faked your death at the hands of a supposed "drunk driver". This was nothing more than a sick cry for attention - what an insult to those who have been victimized by "real" drunk driving. Good riddance.
*And before people start flaming me for being a coward and posting an "anonymous review", I don't have a FF account, and honestly don't feel like opening one just for the sake of posting one review. The name above is my real name, so I'm hardly being anonymous.
| 00redsvt chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I'm a little confused. I happened to see your story under someone else's favorites and I couldn't stop admin myself why you're name was so familiar. Then I remembered that you had died in a "drunk driving accident". I remembered crying about it because a drunk took the life of a close family member. I remember thinking of what your family must be going through and how my family had so many unanswered questions. I'm not going to judge you or say anything mean, because, let's be honest, I wouldn't wish death upon anyone or anything. I'm just a little upset. Alls I'm saying is, next time you, or anyone for that matter, decides to fake their demise, don't pretend it was a DDA. That scenario hits too close to home for too many people. Okay? I do hope you have success in life, with whatever you choose to do. And although it doesn't sound like it (okay fine I'm judging) from your "apology" , I hope you've learned a valuable lesson about lies and deceit. Have many more wonderful days in your life. Deuces. -RED
| Kaschii chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
I'm glad that you're alive, but it doesn't excuse the fact that you faked your own death. Your apology was self-centered. You may have been a great author, but you will never be a great person. It saddens me to think that people thought both of you.
I fell in love with your stories. I was so devastated that you wouldn't be able to finish them. You're not a bitch, you're not an asshole, you're not stupid or dumb. Just selfish. Selfish that you couldn't tell the truth. Selfish for faking a death to get away from fanfiction. You should've just left and never came back. We probably would've been better off not knowing that you faked it.
I clicked on your name to read your stories once again, but after reading your bio. I'm so disgusted with you.
All I can say is "Good Riddance"
| wow chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I am freaking just feeling wow. What in the hell is wrong with you? Do you have a death wish because karma is a bitch. I cried for you when I thought you passes. I would get all sad when ever i read a story and at the end of a chapter it would say RIP DADDYS LITTLE CANNIBAL. WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU! but you are forgiven i cnt hold a grudge
| BabyBlue chapter 2 . 9/30/2011
Gah, I realised how my first/second paragraph can be misconstrued. No matter what you did, you didn't, don't and never deserved those threats or to actually die. I am relieved that you are alive, but I can tell you that the relief is overshadowed by my anger at you for what you did.
Regardless, I stand by my word. I am glad that you are gone off fanfiction.
| BabyBlue chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Unbelievable. Absolutely unbelievable and disgusting.
I actually really liked you and your stories. I used to respect you, and when I found out about your "faked" death, I actually cried for you. Today, I saw your name come up under search topics and I decided, why not, I'll re-read her stories. She was such a good person who didn't deserve to die.
It makes me feel like a fool to have actually cared about your supposed death. It makes me feel like a fool that I actually posted about you on my profile and in my author's notes for your stories.
But if it makes me a fool to care about someone's death, I don't know what that tells me about you.
Yes, it is horrible that people were telling you to suicide and what not. But the day you, your sister and bronzehaired girl decided to play on you readers by posting up notices of your death all over fanfiction, you likened yourself to one of them. Yes, it is fanfiction.
You may think you are justifying yourself by saying that. But you forget, who reads and writes fanfiction? People. Human beings with feelings. You have hurt so many others through your childish acts, and there will never be any justification sufficient enough to answer to that.
I am going to say that this is the day I wash my hands off you and bronzehaired girl. I can tell you, that if I come across any of your published books, that I know are yours, you can bet that you won't have me as your reader or fan. Not now not ever.
You will hardly ever see me so bitter, but I am glad you are gone off fanfiction. We don't need or want someone like you in this community.
| Becky chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Back in 2009, I read your profile and was highly saddened by your death and wondered what your family must be going through.
Today, I was wondering about that poor girl who died at 18, just a few weeks prior to my 18th and wondered what she could have missed out but it seems like you're not dead.
What you did was sick. At a young age, I was victim of a drunk-driving which has left me scared of ever driving a car, so that kind of shit shouldn't be joked around with. The blasé way you treated your "death" wasn't funny at all and I doubt you're even sorry. If you were truly sorry, you wouldn't have done it, in fact, you wouldn't have waited two years to admit that you were wrong.
Yes, being 18 is one of those rocky ages between child and adult but it faking death is a stupid thing to do. I'm 17 and I wouldn't go to such lengths to take a break from fanfiction. I was just log out and wouldn't log back in. It is that simple. If you were really arsed about the fans, you wouldn't have faked your death. Your 'resentment' for fanfiction is a farce. You needed an excuse to justify what you did and you came up short.
I don't care if you never read this, or no one reads this, but I just want you to know that being 18 and about to graduate and being stressed and shit isn't an excuse to cause a bunch of people to feel sorry or leave reviews and stuff. I just hope you have a good life and to enjoy it. As for reading anything else you ever write, don't count me. I don't read bullshit.
| iluvJasperHale is Sad chapter 16 . 9/16/2011
I can't believe what I've just read. When I found out you had "died" I was going through problems with depression. I actually cried over you, a person who I didn't know but who was a good story writter and had tragically died. I still thought about you once in a while,thinking what a shame it was that someone so talented had died. I am now no longer depressed and I am DISGUSTED. The hurt you caused to other people by doing this is imence. And roping in you're "friends" help is just sick. I'm glad that you are alive but you are such an immature person who hasn't grown up. And bragging about being an author? That spells out complete attention-whore. Although, I cant say this surprises me if you smoke pot. You lied to thousands of people and you should feel ashamed. I really hope that you can grow up.
| Moon chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
I know you probably won't ever read this, but i still feel like i have to say something.
I'm not going to bash you and say you're a bitch. But when i clicked onto your profile, just to read one of your stories again, i was completely shocked to find that you had faked your own death.
I understand why you did it and i get that everyone makes mistakes. I just wish your mistake hadn't affected so many people. I remember the post saying you had died and being so sad about it. I didn't even know you and thought it was bloody terrible. To come back and see that it was all faked just so you didn't have to write fanfiction any more ...
I feel so stupid now for believing that you had died and i'm sure i'm not the only one. I don't believe you are a bad person, i just hope you have learnt from what you did.
| Cali978 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Wow. I'm completely flabbergasted and honestly disgusted that you would stoop so low as to fake your OWN DEATH just because you didn't want to write FANFICTION. Well guess what honey, you didn't need to tell everyone in this community that you were dead to do that. You could've just said that you were sick of it, and STOPPED WRITING. NO ONE WAS FORCING YOU TO DO ANYTHING.
We have nothing to do with what's going on in your life outside of this one. And this apology? Pfft. This isn't an apology. This is just some bullshit rant about how your life sucked before and now you're enjoying your drugs and the money you have earned from the REAL fiction you sold. Get over yourself. Your stories weren't that monumental. They were good don't get me wrong. But they weren't something that stuck in this community. I honestly forgot all about you.
You were a tragedy. You were someone that was going to be remembered as an author with creative ideas. But now? You are just an asshole. And I mean that with complete sincerity. As far as I'm concerned you can shove this apology and your "real" work, right up your ass sweetheart.
| Viry Natzy chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I really sorry for all of those who ever do that things to you, really, and you are rigth everyone are a child whit 18 years old. But well... you dont have to said all those things... yeah sortf of people here are really obsses, because thats the word, they are obsses (i was to in a time) so dont feel attacked because, its just writting, its not real, everyone write stupid things... specially the teenagers... but well you said your last words its oks XD I almost 100% sure you'll never going to see this review but I'm glad that your fine, I'm glad that you move on and growe up... so sorry for you mother, Be fine. And I'll expecting your book, I hope that you send me the name Good bye, DLC...