Reviews for Broken Twins
Hmason chapter 24 . 10/16
really great story shame it ended here would have liked to see it finished
sonic chapter 24 . 10/1
I liked the chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23
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TrueSageControl8GatesMadara chapter 4 . 4/30
I love the evilness ahahhahahahaaaaa
TrueSageControl8GatesMadara chapter 3 . 4/30
gotta say like naruto's character and the way there interacting so 9/10 at character interactions story is getting more up my alley but i think it would have been better to start from the tragic childhood and not done flashbacks that way you have more connection while reading but still good
TrueSageControl8GatesMadara chapter 2 . 4/30
not bad a 8/10 for your writing style and a 5/10 for story so far
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29
Ronin are samurai not ninja
Guest chapter 9 . 1/28
So stupid
Guest chapter 13 . 12/15/2016
ud be good at writing canon naruto...this is not a compliment.
Unknown Person chapter 8 . 8/28/2016
I know this story is old and you probably won't read this but I wanted to let you know that I'm upset that I wasted 8 chapters worth of time reading this. Even if that only amounts to 15 or so minutes. Everyone talks too freaking much, especially your Naruto. Literally 80% of the lines are dialogue and most of the short scenes that you throw us (the readers) between do nothing to add to what we know about the main character or the main plot.
flight of the ninjaflamingo chapter 24 . 4/27/2016
WHAT THE FYUUACUCUDSIOHJCIIDOCJCKKKKKK OMG I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT
Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire chapter 5 . 12/15/2015
Kishimoto loving piece of filth.
Chaos Karma chapter 24 . 11/16/2015
hohoo how interesting such unique turn of events but it was obvious it was kimimaro since he was one of the only oto ninjas that females would find attractive since suigetsu wasn't a otonin and it basicaly tells you it couldn't hve been kabuto
StoneTheLoner chapter 4 . 9/29/2015
Dropped. Again and again and again you do EVERYTHING to make him stand out. Are you just stupid or something? For somebody who claims to be Kage level, to be surprised by a mere genin attacking him is pathetic. "In sheer surprise he didn't even dodge... or move..." Really? You say he needs to be secretive, and he does the opposite. You say he is strong, yet he stares dumbly instead of simply deflecting the senbon. Nothing happening in this fiction makes sense. Things happen only because you want them to, not because it's realistic.
StoneTheLoner chapter 3 . 9/29/2015
Your character is not logical at all. He is apparently a skilled ninja, but somehow doesn't realize he is under a genjutsu, when the scroll he is holding changes multiple times from what it was?. And then when told the forest is full of camera's, he shows off? Again, is it not important for him to slide under the radar? So having people watch him slaughter 2 teams makes no sense. Not to mention when he talks, he seems to have no self control. The situation with the Oto ninja is full of inconsistencies. He plans to use their connection to Orochimaru, then tells them info that could make them abandon him? He offers to go do the mission for them, for what reason? When they refuse that idea, he tags along, again for what reason? Could he not have found another team, stole their headband, and moved on?
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