Reviews for Broken Twins
this story is sh chapter 10 . 11/5/2017
why the fuck does this naruto talk so much? he's a raving retard with serious mental issues. Does this make him seem badass to you, because if it does you have mental issues aswell. Also why the fuck does he tell his secrets to everyone during the preliminaries, 'thats the angel of death, she shouldn't have it because i have the other one' what a fuckwit, well your the writer so i guess your the fuckwit.
PS, who the fuck names a sword the angel of death
Hmason chapter 24 . 10/16/2017
really great story shame it ended here would have liked to see it finished
sonic chapter 24 . 10/1/2017
I liked the chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
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Beyond Dimensional chapter 4 . 4/30/2017
I love the evilness ahahhahahahaaaaa
Beyond Dimensional chapter 3 . 4/30/2017
gotta say like naruto's character and the way there interacting so 9/10 at character interactions story is getting more up my alley but i think it would have been better to start from the tragic childhood and not done flashbacks that way you have more connection while reading but still good
Beyond Dimensional chapter 2 . 4/30/2017
not bad a 8/10 for your writing style and a 5/10 for story so far
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
Ronin are samurai not ninja
Guest chapter 9 . 1/28/2017
So stupid
Guest chapter 13 . 12/15/2016
ud be good at writing canon naruto...this is not a compliment.
Unknown Person chapter 8 . 8/28/2016
I know this story is old and you probably won't read this but I wanted to let you know that I'm upset that I wasted 8 chapters worth of time reading this. Even if that only amounts to 15 or so minutes. Everyone talks too freaking much, especially your Naruto. Literally 80% of the lines are dialogue and most of the short scenes that you throw us (the readers) between do nothing to add to what we know about the main character or the main plot.
flight of the ninjaflamingo chapter 24 . 4/27/2016
WHAT THE FYUUACUCUDSIOHJCIIDOCJCKKKKKK OMG I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT
Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire chapter 5 . 12/15/2015
Kishimoto loving piece of filth.
Chaos Karma chapter 24 . 11/16/2015
hohoo how interesting such unique turn of events but it was obvious it was kimimaro since he was one of the only oto ninjas that females would find attractive since suigetsu wasn't a otonin and it basicaly tells you it couldn't hve been kabuto
StoneTheLoner chapter 4 . 9/29/2015
Dropped. Again and again and again you do EVERYTHING to make him stand out. Are you just stupid or something? For somebody who claims to be Kage level, to be surprised by a mere genin attacking him is pathetic. "In sheer surprise he didn't even dodge... or move..." Really? You say he needs to be secretive, and he does the opposite. You say he is strong, yet he stares dumbly instead of simply deflecting the senbon. Nothing happening in this fiction makes sense. Things happen only because you want them to, not because it's realistic.
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