|Reviews for A Murmur of Fire in the Vein|
| paintedbywords chapter 23 . 8/20/2014
This story was incredible. It could honestly be published if the names were changed! It was so wonderfully written and the plot was perfect. I never got bored and lost interest, and the characters were all portrayed well. Great job!
| M.S.Carol chapter 8 . 7/27/2014
well that as a roller coaster ride of emotions
| M.S.Carol chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
indeed layered characters
| M.S.Carol chapter 2 . 7/27/2014
I'm really liking this story. it's quite fun.
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/29/2014
As a girl who's had a boyfriend go through rehab twice, this was a wonderful read. I related to both Alice and Bella and Jasper may as well have been my ex. You created a great story that really touched me and I appreciate the reality of it all.
| ChefMae chapter 23 . 3/11/2014
I loved your story the situations you wrote about are very true and realistic I suffer from both depression and a mild case of addiction and I could totally relate to the story
| Sorry. im anon chapter 23 . 2/15/2014
You did beautifully in the telling of Jasper's addictions as well as his mental illnesses. Very real, very raw and the emotion came through perfectly without being too much.
| bellachaos chapter 23 . 2/15/2014
Outstanding story. I don't usualy read all human Twilight fics but you did an amazing job with the characters and the relationships.
| Lily Tsukino chapter 23 . 1/11/2014
Great story. Thank you for writing it. :)
| stone5fly chapter 14 . 1/10/2014
Paul Newman...I still believe to be the best looking movie star to date!
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/8/2014
Thank you for such a wonderful story!
| missmelly chapter 10 . 1/7/2014
How have I missed this beautifully crafted story? I am devouring it now to make up for lost time. Wow, you write well!
| Inlovewithjazz chapter 23 . 12/29/2013
A very well written captivating story, I couldn't put it down!
| pegasus5406 chapter 23 . 12/14/2013
What a wonderful, but true to life story hon...I enjoyed reading it very much...thanks for sharing it with us...bigg huggs. Peggy
| vmp1 chapter 23 . 12/11/2013
Thank you for sharing your story.