Reviews for A Time to Dance
mrs.milfoy chapter 1 . 2/22
How did I just find this fic?! One of my favorite pairings ever-not to mention a rare one and often poorly portrayed one-and you made it shine. Believable and bittersweet. Good dialog. Just nicely well rounded without a story book ending. Perfect. My only complaint is that it wasn't longer. I would love to see what you could do with them in a chaptered piece with lots of room for development and introspection. Although as a oneshot this one timed out just right. Also it was hot with frank and realistic sex. Not a lot of pandering and flowering it out. Just a tremendous story. Thank you!
Heya chapter 1 . 2/18
Hey! I loved the H/N smut, would you please do more? I really enjoyed the blend of aristocratic-ness and filthiness in equal parts and would like to see more of the pairing come to life. There's not enough H/N smut around which saddens me- unless you can point me to somewhere that has it in abundance?

I hope you take my request to heart and give it some thought at the very least. Love you lots for this delicious smut, Laurie/ Demelza!
oneeyereader chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
your too
firebolthallow1572 chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
I feel Harry should been with Mrs. Malfoy instead of Mr. Malfoy
robertsmithseeker chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Wow. The feeling of the story was amazing the ending was excellent if bittersweet. I loved it.
Saraid chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Good Gods! I love your work! xxx
Pedobee chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
loved it, keep em coming;)
potterheadcharles chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
ah,not always a happy ending..
I love JKR 4 writing HP but hate her for ending him up with Ginny...
she is sooooo irritating...yuch
LuxEterna1 chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
i liked it
Hpfanboy31800 chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
That was great. Truly great.
major wallace chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
nice work
char1234 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
A very enjoyable one shot between a unique pairing. I must say Im upset that Harry and Narcissa didn't at the very least continue (I don't condone cheating but they made such a connection in one night while Ginny was just background). The lemons were very steamy indeed! Well done.
SophieAngel69 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
I didn't really like that to be honest, it was written well, as is everything you write, but I'm not a big fan of cheating and I usually prefer a relationship to develops. Its just a personal thing, but I believe a deeper commitment than a one night stand is needed to ease the guilt of unfaithfulness.
mymindasanopenbook chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Hot hot hot, an amazing story, an amazing writer. You Miss, are splendid.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
This is my second reading of your wonderful story! I can't remember if I reviewed last time. It doesn't matter! I enjoyed your story and I admit I find the pairing unique and utterly fascinating! Thank you.
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