Reviews for Breathe
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
A great story. Very well written.
wolflover5000 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Jacobluvr1212 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
(not intended to be mean) WHERE THE HELL IS THE REST OF IT?
twi-nighter chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Okay that was totally awesome! I mean really... Jake and Nessie and the whole love triangle with Nahuel... they hurt each other without even knowing it throughout the whole story... hope they can fix this cuz its a real mess! Loved it!
GringaLoca chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Hey! I really liked this one. I've always thought about what would happen with the whole Bella/Jacob thing after he imprinted on Nessie.

I really liked it!
kirsty chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
PLEASE for the love of god keep writing!

you are amazing!


go you

iaawg i am a werewolf girl chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
you really need to make a sequel to this its really good
101amy101 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
this was a really good story. You should keep doing more like it.

p.s. it would be really nice if you finished this one you know

like tell us if she finds jacob. your leaving me on a limb here please tell me what happens next!

really good
Lunawolf2496 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
that was a graet fic! thanks! please make a sequel please! (puppy dog face)
beth chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
this is good. i like nessie with jack better then nahuel but i like that he tryed. i kind of wish it had been longer and shown her making him listen and them kissing or something
Talise Lovela chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Poor Jake. And a little bit of Renesmee.

I don't know why, but that sounded OOC for Renesmee. I know why- because I always thought of her as cool, calm, collected, and definitely not hot-tempered and teenager stupid.

It was good, though. Keep writing!
RoseDimitriLove chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
This was beautiful. I loved it! I loved all the flashbacks!