Reviews for Undone |
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![]() ![]() Loved this story! Very well done! |
![]() ![]() wow... those last couple of paragraphs were really powerful |
![]() ![]() ![]() so beautiful! This is a great start |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written and the very definition of a “slow burn" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying this immensely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. Funny. Well Written first chapter. LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is absolutely amazing! Honestly one of my favorite stories. I know you haven't updated in so long but I really do hope you return and revisit this story. It's written so beautifully and you're a fabulous author. Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Powerfully written. You got under their skins, which is not an easy task. Ty for sharing this. |
![]() ![]() Dear Muraka6211: It might be that you never read this review but... I cannot believe I never read this fic, looked on communities and found it. So belatedly, I must express my appreciation for your story and its very appropriate ending. Thanks again. Botsey Botsey |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muraka6211, you're an amazing writer. When I finished the tenth chapter, I felt I'd read a complete work. If you never post again on this fiction, never mind, it's perfect as it is. Thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how the start of their relationship was like signing a contract. Spock wanted to make Nyota very sure she understood what they were undertaking, even though she'd already thought of the pros and cons. He's just too adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *squeal* Oh, this was hot and adorable, like Spock. I loved this chapter. |
![]() ![]() Super amazing! But where's the rest D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Is it going to be finished? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very well done. Thanks for sharing! |