Reviews for Taking Umbridge
Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2016
Hey, so I know you haven't updated this story in like what? 7 years? But could you maybe just do one more chapter? Please?
YokaiAngel chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
E chapter 2 . 2/7/2016
This is really good
JadeIron chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
The feels! Love the story! Will it be continued?
MagicWriterK chapter 2 . 8/20/2015
So, J.K.R. killed Fred, but not the despicable toad known as Dolores J. Umbridge? HMMM. SEEMS LEGIT.
But all of his thoughts about Lily just broke my heart. "Lily? Lily, why have you been crying?" jUST THE IMAGE OF LITTLE SNAPE AND LITTLE LILY, SNAPE AWKWARLDY COMFORTING THE CRYING GIRL IS JUST TOO MUCH FOR ME.
Ooh look it's me chapter 2 . 3/31/2015
Okay- this is awesome. I love it! Everything is totally within character and a lot of it sounds almost like canon! :) good luck with your future writing!
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mandancie chapter 2 . 1/16/2015
oh wow! these were really good. I so hope that one day you will come back to these. :)
evans137 chapter 2 . 12/23/2014
God, this is really good! I love the idea of Umbridge changing her methods and how Snape found him and deided to help. Please, you can't abandon this wonderful fanic! It has so much potential and your style of writing is really good as well! Please finish this great story!
fishtail24 chapter 2 . 9/20/2014
pleeease continue this story? :)
I Should Not Have Said That chapter 2 . 7/15/2014
So...yeah, I know its been like 5 years since you updated, but can you PLEASE post more of this?! It's fantastic. :)
Maddy Love Castiel chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
Oh my this story is fantastic! The way you've written all the characters is spot on! Even Umbridge the Cow was exactly her bitchy evil self. Harry may think that Snape and her are similar but in reality, Snape would never hurt a student so severely.

Magnificent story! I'm already hooked after two chapters! I'm kind of sad to see that this fantastic story hasn't been updated since 2009. I'll understand if this story is to remain unfinished. I'll just have to create my own ending in my head. Thank you for sharing!


Ali chapter 2 . 2/21/2014
Hi! I really enjoyed this story but I see you haven't updated since 2009. If you still go on fan fiction and see this please update! :)
Severmentor chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
I've just found this story. I see it was last updated in 2009. Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it and wish that you would continue it. I love Snape/Harry stories and this one has real potential.
Lionasha No Bruja chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
That was the most awful thing I've read in ages! I actually cried for Harry- he never seems to get a break.
Team Major Whitlock chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
I love this story so far and I hope that you can update soon. Just to let you know that if you need any help with this story either with ideas or just help then feel free to PM me no matter how big or small, I hope you update soon. Summer x
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