Reviews for Runic Animagi
RayneG45 chapter 2 . 1/16
While so far it's interesting, I have some suggestions. I mean these only to be constructive.

1: First person perspective tends to only really work with certen framing. Such as when the character is telling you a story. This is for many reasons. One of them is that it has a pretense as if the reader is a character. That can often be even more awkward to read. As your story lacks the framing of Harry telling you a story about himself, it just feels weird to read from the point of view as if we are in Harry's head.

2: Combing first person perspective and present tense makes a work feel awkward. Again, especially when there is no real reason or framing for it.

3: In general writing flows easiest for readers if it's in third person.
Sandy chapter 15 . 12/2/2024
This is really bad, Harry is such a cringey Mary Sue and all the grammar mistakes are killing me.
Nimbus2023 chapter 26 . 9/26/2024
The diadem wasn't on the bust until Harry placed it there when hiding the Half-Blood Prince's potion book during his sixth year after nearly killing Draco in the bathroom. Before that it was hidden in a drawer of the cabinet the bust was resting on, he placed the wig and diadem on the bust's head to help him find the book if he ever needed it again
Nimbus2023 chapter 5 . 9/24/2024
Absolutely loved the post owl commentary.
Incantations7 chapter 25 . 9/16/2024
I still love what happened to the Prophet…
Reaper1990 chapter 4 . 8/25/2024
Why, seriously why do you cater to ejits?
RaiDaniels chapter 36 . 8/24/2024
nice reading thanks a lot!
flys36 chapter 3 . 8/4/2024
Isn't Harry 15 about to turn 16? What's the drinking age over there?
scyfly chapter 9 . 7/29/2024
im beginning to think dumbledore is stoned as well
csheila chapter 1 . 7/7/2024
Fun
RavensBloodstone chapter 5 . 7/4/2024
I love this chapter , ive never had an owls perspective and t was awesome !
Guest chapter 4 . 6/12/2024
old bastard i detest him dumbles lol
gdecon chapter 11 . 5/24/2024
"two of whome " with reference to Daph's two friends rather than "two of which"
gdecon chapter 8 . 5/24/2024
Harry being an Assistant Prof or instructor would make more sense. Both are entry level but the latter is usualy not "tenure track"
csheila chapter 35 . 5/22/2024
Yeah but her epilogue sucked
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