Reviews for Kiss
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
good. But that was the SHORTEST story i've ever seen.
Ezzy kun chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
LUV IT! just noticed there isn't enough dee dee x mandark! they need to put more
HRHPrincessTricia chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Very cute. Any chance of a longer story about how they got to this point?
rainbowspring chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
What a sweet kiss!
Morgana Deryn chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I like it. It's sweet and cute. I like it when someone just randomly throws out a sensitive Mandark instead of a really evil one.
DefyingPhysix chapter 1 . 3/5/2010

I've never read a drabble so short- but I liked it. It was more like poerty than much else. You see such few darkxDeedee fics, anymore...

outlinedsilver chapter 1 . 2/23/2010

I liked it. :)
lightning bird chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Short, but very sweet, especially the last two sentences.
pinkpuffy21 chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
It was very nice...short, but nice. I suggest editing tho, lots of, um oh the part about "as he stared into his ocean, blue ones..." HIS I beleave should be HERS, unless I didn't read it right. And "He smiled at the sight of her being happily." Do you mean Her(deedee) Being HAPPY? or do you mean her exsistance makes Mandark smile, Happily? In the start of it about the bangs. The "...and forehead." bit, everyone knows bangs are located on the forehead so it's not really needed.

_hope this help yah!-pp21