Reviews for The End
HoneyBeeez chapter 3 . 8/31/2014
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh

I like this a lot :DDD thanks!
damons-hot-as-hell chapter 3 . 7/28/2014
cute
Guest chapter 3 . 6/7/2014
awwww sweet
Butterfree chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
This story had me smiling the whole time from how sweet it was. You did an amazing job describing not only Abe's emotions but also the setting they were in, as well as the detail behind every action they make. I could picture the two so clearly in the last scene. And really, those are always the best stories.

Thanks for the read!

Queenie
ClockRepair chapter 3 . 5/20/2014
Awww omg that was such a sweet story. I loved reading Abe's own process of discovering and accepting his feelings for Mihashi. It was just perfect :)
Caracu chapter 3 . 1/13/2014
This was friggin short but sweet /cries
fadi254 chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
I don't know how to start...
Just like the others this was superbly well written. The imagery in this chapter was phenomenal, capturing every moment so well that rather than read it I FELT it and that is one of the most important things a writer should be able to do.

Not to mention the heartwarming metaphors that seem to interpret Abe's feelings so well. I couldn't have said it any other way. I couldn't have imagined this chapter any better.

Thank you very much for writing this, bless you.
fadi254 chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
I can not emphasize enough how you write the characters so WELL.
It is obvious that you understand very well personalities and how characters would act and react.

I'm not thinking "That character wouldn't do something like that in that situation" like I think in some other fan fics, because you write them so masterfully.

This story is very well written, I'm going to say again.
fadi254 chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Where have you been all my life?

I'm serious.

This is the most well written fanfiction of Oofuri I've read and it's so much more mature. You use imagery and metaphors and actual literary elements that make a story more real and more unforgettable and you use them so well.

I commend you on your skill please do not stop. You are my inspiration to write my own story.
SitDog-Boy chapter 3 . 4/17/2013
I know it's been said 50 times already with the reviews, but this is wonderful, and I absolutely adored reading it. Thank you for this, really. Abe was really well written, too, as were the other characters. Great fic!
fanfictionisfun chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
That was so beautifully written. You made me feel things.
Freya's Doll chapter 3 . 3/4/2013
God, I love this! Simply amazing.
Silver and Black Flames chapter 3 . 12/5/2012
Thaaat was kind of absolutely freakin' adorable. I may have flailed from the sheer adorableness. And I love the very ending, how it comes full circle. And have I mentioned the adorable factor?
AzyumiChan chapter 3 . 11/22/2012
finally found a very well-written oofuri fanfic YuY
lover-of-light chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
excuse me I have to go flail around on the floor ngrfjkrfjn
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