|Reviews for ThirtyThree Percent|
| ArisenDragonfire chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
hahahahaha, oh god that ending!
| Deedlit-Murata chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
hahaha I laughed so much, so cute and fresh _
| mochiusagi chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Awwwwww super cute! Awww Naoto makes an adorable L.
| Bloody Shooter chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
That was so cool
I can imagine Naoto watching Death Note xD
| Arcananox chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
This is most definatly incredable. I enjoy reading all of your fics, and I keep repeatingly reading them. You're very good, and your Souji/Naoto stories are my favorite. Nice work.
| SamJaz chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Again, the hilarity.
I really like the pairing. You'd think that most people prefer a Rise or Yukiko pairing but turns out that this is the most popular one, pretty much for the same reasons you write about, IE they are good together.
| The return of pp chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Wow! a well- written story on ! I'm still recovering from the shock, but I must say how much I enjoyed this story. It was - dare I say it- cute. And I don't even like this pairing. Please keep up the good work and keep writing. Show 'em how its done.
| Avarenda chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
aw this was a cute little oneshot. Totally favoriting this one.
| Formidonis chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
I don’t know what Death Note is exactly, so I’m probably missing some nuances, but what I *did* pick up on was 100% grade A pure adorable.
A fun concept, witty dialogue, much blushing, and Naoto at her “overly logical but still oh so cute” best makes for one great fluffy scene. Good stuff.
| JavaGirl chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
WOW! THIS IS GOOD!
If only FortunesRevolver expand the story to a more extreme dating measurement, like throw Naoto into Souji's futon and ...BEP. AHAHA! Just kidding.
Keep on the good work, FortunesRevolver!
always love your Naoto x Souji story.
| Sybil Corvax chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Yay! Death Note Refereance!
| Kefka VI chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Nice Death Note reference.
| Solaceinsilence chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Oh my 0/0 very nice fan fic I love this 100 theme challenge can't wait for the others!
| MichiShirogane chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Really good indeed! Nice story, Fortune I'm looking forward to your 100 themes
| Twotwentytwo chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
I approve of this recent upsurge in writing. I really enjoy these kind of "slice-of-life" moments as in-game you don't really get to see much of the actual relationship beyond what's implied.
Nice job, overall.