|Reviews for Clouded Emerald|
| Kaya70 chapter 13 . 2/2
Love it its been a few years since you have written this story hope you can update soon
| anglegirl25 chapter 13 . 12/30/2013
i like could u plz update
| Mashkai30 chapter 13 . 12/12/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
| jh831 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
just a suggestion, if you do do slash, then put it in the summary. some people do.
liked the first chapter and the plot,
hope you have good luck with the story
| anonymous chapter 13 . 6/7/2013
| jj chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
you already have a plothole at the begining of the story.
Why would Harry go live with "muggles" when he would have been just as safe with his mother.
He would still have had the same blood protection as he did with his aunt possibly even stronger since his parents would have actually wanted him. Not only that but he would not have been ignorant about the wizarding world and would have been comfortable with magic since according to you his parents would still be able to do minor feats of magic
| moonprincess97524 chapter 10 . 1/14/2013
I was just thinking about something, when Harry was first informed that his parents lived he was told that they were little more then squibs because of the magic that they used to servive the killing curse, I thought that it took a lot of magic to be able to turn into an aniaimal so how can James turn into Prongs if he has so little magic?
| NightWithMoon chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
... It just doesn't make sense. Dumbledore may be manipulative, but he's also brilliant - either you can have him be evil (wanting harry to be abused, and making sure everyone who would prevent it is out of the way) or you can have him be benevolent, in which case the scenario you present would never have come to pass.
(also you have the potters casting dark magic to protect themselves from the killing curse, but completely disregarding the protection of their first and only child? Not likely).
| JlovesGaara chapter 13 . 10/26/2012
This story is amaaaazing! I am so sad to see it discontinued. You are a great writer!
| tierce japhrimel chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
what the fuck kinda reaction is that from Harry? grrr... such a build up of angst and a total let down for delivery... pffft
| amata0221 chapter 13 . 7/1/2012
Great story, please continue this.
| mary blackman chapter 13 . 3/23/2012
i loved this story if you ever update or do a sequel please send me the link
| Lizzosaur chapter 13 . 3/22/2012
| WarriorDarkAngel chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
I am all for Harry/Jasper :)
| yaoipotterfan chapter 1 . 11/20/2011