Reviews for Clouded Emerald
draco7347 chapter 13 . 6/16
rereally loved this story cant wait for new chapters
Lady Kaiki chapter 13 . 3/22
Awesome ! Plz, update soon !
Snape Lover 1981 chapter 13 . 2/13
Love this story! Are you going to be updating it?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
Why do most of you crossover writers always make Harry homosexual. Transference? What? Never mind, won't read more of this story.
belladu57 chapter 13 . 10/14/2014
Very good
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
Harry/Jacob!
Skendo chapter 13 . 6/2/2014
Really good :) please update :)
Kaya70 chapter 13 . 2/2/2014
Love it its been a few years since you have written this story hope you can update soon
anglegirl25 chapter 13 . 12/30/2013
i like could u plz update
Mashkai30 chapter 13 . 12/12/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
jh831 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
just a suggestion, if you do do slash, then put it in the summary. some people do.
liked the first chapter and the plot,
hope you have good luck with the story
anonymous chapter 13 . 6/7/2013
Update Please!
jj chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
you already have a plothole at the begining of the story.
Why would Harry go live with "muggles" when he would have been just as safe with his mother.
He would still have had the same blood protection as he did with his aunt possibly even stronger since his parents would have actually wanted him. Not only that but he would not have been ignorant about the wizarding world and would have been comfortable with magic since according to you his parents would still be able to do minor feats of magic
moonprincess97524 chapter 10 . 1/14/2013
I was just thinking about something, when Harry was first informed that his parents lived he was told that they were little more then squibs because of the magic that they used to servive the killing curse, I thought that it took a lot of magic to be able to turn into an aniaimal so how can James turn into Prongs if he has so little magic?
NightWithMoon chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
... It just doesn't make sense. Dumbledore may be manipulative, but he's also brilliant - either you can have him be evil (wanting harry to be abused, and making sure everyone who would prevent it is out of the way) or you can have him be benevolent, in which case the scenario you present would never have come to pass.
(also you have the potters casting dark magic to protect themselves from the killing curse, but completely disregarding the protection of their first and only child? Not likely).
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