Reviews for Pride Comes Before The Fall
za worlda chapter 6 . 9/7
chris8124u chapter 6 . 5/20
I really like the story the only real critique I could really find is that the whole honor thing was a little off because in almost any warrior culture anyone who purposely interfere with an honor duel would cause the person who did to lose some amount of honor ( not sure how much) and as for adopting someone like that into the clan would have been a big no no
JP Lake chapter 7 . 5/16
Nerima Screwjob... BACKFIRED! Nice!
Stratos263 chapter 8 . 5/8
I like the alternative ending. The original ending i find that Nabiki being in jail find but her being raped in prison was overdoing it in my opinion.
Stratos263 chapter 7 . 5/8
Well this is going smoother then the original
Stratos263 chapter 6 . 5/8
I feel sorry for Akane
Stratos263 chapter 5 . 5/8
Dumbass they are. I feel pity for Nabiki
Stratos263 chapter 4 . 5/8
That is not going end pretty for them
Stratos263 chapter 3 . 5/8
No they wouldn't
Stratos263 chapter 2 . 5/8
Yeah sweet justice for ranma
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 5/8
Yeah that is justice for ranma
StArLoRdMac2 chapter 8 . 4/12
he leido todo tu fic y la verdad me impreciono al ver lo de la traiciĆ³n a Ranma cruzaron la linea, Ranma tiene mas honor que los tendo, sus padres y los otros, he aprendido una cosa de este fic que todo tiene un limite, Ranma es de los pocos que tiene honor te felicito.
RatherFabulous chapter 6 . 3/21
Wow. Ranma turned into the 1960's version of Mack Bolan.
RomenXGreenDog123 chapter 2 . 1/21
This story is getting interesting. I like these of kind stories which take a dark tone. This is really good.
bluemarvel0 chapter 6 . 10/30/2015
Wow... just, wow. You said that this would be a very dark story and you didn't disappoint.
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