|Reviews for TSK: Saeko's Diary|
| Renkhal chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Hey, I like it!
| DavisJes chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Should be more like a diary entry with a date and things that are currently going on. This first entry is good as it is Seako starting a journal for the first time and is reflective the rest should conenside (sp?) with the events that are going on that day. Diaries are not perfect so there are mistakes in them but it seems to me that Seako would try to write well as if she were writing a paper just because she is use to writing well as if others would read it.
I think you are missing a word here.
"what he had in mind and what had in mind were completely different."